On 6/3/2020 1:46 PM, Jason Cobb via agora-discussion wrote: > On 6/3/20 4:44 PM, Publius Scribonius Scholasticus via agora-business wrote: >> Replace the text "Rule 478" in Rule 2139, "The Registrar" with "the >> rule entitled "Fora"". >> >> Replace the text "Rule 1789" in Rule 2139, "The Registrar" with "the >> rule entitled "Cantus Cygneus"". > > > Honestly, it might just be better to nuke the last paragraph of that > rule - it doesn't really add anything. >
Middle ground: recognize that both "publicity of a forum" and "Cantus/Writs" are well-defined terms of art so the "as described in..." clauses aren't needed at all. And here: > an action by a set of one or more dependent actions identified in > Rule 1728 R1728 starts: > The following methods of taking actions are known as "dependent > actions": so again, the term of art "dependent actions" is well-defined so the "identified in Rule 1728" is also wholly unneeded.
