>       If an inactice player has been inactive continuously for the past

typo: "inactice" twice

>       60 days, then any player CAN deregister em with notice; for such
>       a deregistration to be successful, the publication of intent must
>       have been sent to the inactive player's registered email address
>       in addition to being published. The Registrar SHOULD attempt to

I still think sending to eir email address should be a SHOULD or SHALL
rather than a requirement for success, since other players can't know
for sure whether the requirement was met.

>       deregister players who meet this condition.

Looks good other than that. (I just skimmed the new text.)

-- 
Falsifian

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