Thanks, Sheng I think i was just posting version -04 when Sheng posted this, it had all the textual fixes from Mohamed. Then i continued with Brian Carpenters feedback that i just posted as version -05, so pls. review version -05. The changelog in the file summarizes all the points. The change from -04 to -05 did go along leveraging the now hopefully a lot better "ACP connect" (interface & addressing & security) text in draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-09 that i also posted.
As already said to Brians review: If you can, it would be great to not only post to the list, but also open an issue in github for any outstanding issues: https://github.com/anima-wg/autonomic-control-plane/issues Cheers Toerless On Tue, Aug 01, 2017 at 07:23:52AM +0000, Sheng Jiang wrote: > Hi, all > > We received no negative response to the WGLC on > draft-ietf-anima-stable-connectivity-03 during the two-week WGLC and we did > receive good reviews through the WG document stage, through the shepherd > review process and WGLC period. Considering the past history of this work, I, > with my ANIMA chair cap on, feel it is has passed the WGLC and should > advance. This conclusion is made with the condition that the authors would > solve the comments received during the WGLC and these modifications were not > substantial changes from 03 version. If there are big changes, a shorter > second WGLC may be needed. > > Up to now, there is no IPR disclosure linked to this document. > > Once the update is published and it meets the above condition, for which the > second WGLC is not needed, as the document shepherd, I will finalize the > shepherd document and send the document on. > > Best regards, > > Sheng (co-chair, Toerless who as a co-author stayed neutral on the content > side) > -- --- t...@cs.fau.de _______________________________________________ Anima mailing list Anima@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/anima
