On 2020-06-23 10:31 p.m., internet-dra...@ietf.org wrote:
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-25
yes, I read the diffs :-)
- This document describes a modular design for a self-forming, self-
- managing and self-protecting ACP, which is a virtual in-band network
- designed to be as independent as possible of configuration,
+ This document describes a modular design for a self-forming, self-
+ managing and self-protecting ACP, which is a virtual out-of-band
+ network designed to be as independent as possible of configuration,
This change from being a virtual in-band network to a virtual
out-of-band network must have been in response to some comments... It
seems a big change in some ways. I guess it makes this text consistent
with the abstract which has said virtual out-of-band for awhile now.
But, I do have to wonder if we are creating confusion by claiming that
this is an out-of-band mechanism, even though it's really an in-band
mechanism. It's just virtually-out.
I actually do want to start a bike-shed issue here?
Are we describing ourself wrong? Maybe there is some portmanteau that
would be more accurate? I think that the above sentence is essentially
the elevator pitch for all of ANIMA.
There is also a bunch of other text that has been added to the
Introduction, which I think confuses more than it enlightens.
Or at least needs a better copy-edit.
A number of other new sections (9.4..) need a copy-edit to fix some
missing words. I will try to help Toerless with that via github.
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