This sentence is awkward because it repeats a word ("experience"):

"TAUG brings together an invaluable collection of experienced individuals
who have experience in everything from Residential VoIP service through Call
Centre deployments to small-office PBX setups"

I would re-word it to read:
"TAUG brings together an enthusiastic group of professionals who have
experience in many disciplines, including Residential, Small-Medium
Business, Large Enterprise, Call-Centre, Carrier and ISP (to name a few)."
 

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Ian Darwin [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] 
> Sent: March 31, 2006 1:46 PM
> To: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
> Cc: [email protected]
> Subject: Re: [on-asterisk] von brochure
> 
> Thanks to Mike, Dave and others who contributed really good 
> suggestions.
> 
> I've incorporated most of these, and also moved the columns 
> around for a Z-fold (not the widths yet, but the ordering of 
> the columns).
> 
> There is yet another new draft PDF for y'all to look at at 
> http://www.darwinsys.com/tmp/fanfold.pdf
> 
> This is getting close to printing, so any severe problems 
> need to be ferreted out now.
> 
> Ian
> 
> P.S. I know about the wrt54 not being transparent and about 
> column#3 going off the bottom, and the column widths are 
> still not right.
> >
> 
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