All of your suggestions look good to me. I'll incorporate them in one last rev. of the pace.
Tim Bray wrote: >[snip] > 7.2.4 In app:accept, why do you have a magic "entry" value, why not > always use a media type and the default value is application/atom+xml? > The problem here is that application/atom+xml can be used to identify both Atom Feed Documents and Atom Entry Documents. There is no way of differentiating the two based solely on the media type. If I said <accept>application/atom+xml</accept>, I'd basically be saying that clients could post either of the two document types to the collection, which would be incorrect. - James
