Re: Inheritance NSFW Text Based Game
No sadly I am not a writer, not a serious one at any rate.
I have never written anything big mostly instructions for people, sometimes I get a spirt and write a story but I have never really been able to stay on task and certainly not for adult based anything.
I guess I could play through the things and proofread I guess but not really I did notice there is a my in the description of the dining room.
I can move about the house but thats basically it.
One thing you should probably add in are object minipulations and such, for example the nightstand, you clearly need to go to that to advance the main story.
It would also be a good idea for you to have a meal after you use the bathroom at least I do this myself, wash, shave, use the bathroom, have dinner, maybe do some gym.
Now I'd imagine this is not the time I go on my computer but since this is my first day, I'd think you would go outside.
Now maybe add the options in where you release the slaves and sell the mantion, ofcause that could basically trigger a bad end or another story arc probably a bad end.
Now as for locations I really don't care for moving about going back and forth with nvda over the bars, then going where ever.
Maybe each location could have a way to go back to another one.
Also the option to talk gives a default thingy about well this will be the place its not much to look at.
I assume this is written in twine, for the case of accessability, maybe put a edit box for the user to type in commands, and just refresh the pages with this, or simply play without the sidebar and just I don't know, right now the layout is a bit back and forth, I can play that way but it can be a bit slow.
Fair enough, never hurts to test the waters from time to time.
I'll go run down that "my" right now.
Eventually, I want to leave the world open so that the player can do anything they wish, but with prompts for meal times and such. Then it would be up to the player to play the game as they see fit. I could easily picture people falling into patterns of behavior like you mentioned.
Yeah, parting with the mansion WOULD trigger a game ending event. That said, I could picture eventually adding endings involving the sale of the mansion (Both good and bad ends).
I have a three click rule. I want to make it so that if a player is in a "hub" that they can reach any other location within three clicks. For example, reaching the bathroom in the master bathroom is one of the furthest places to reach in the house, from the entry hall, you move to the hallway, then the master bedroom, then the master bath. Three clicks. Same with items in the sidebar, or outside once the mansion grounds start getting added. My hope is that the "back and forth" as you put it won't be too bad if everything is within easy reach.
Discussions with the girls is something I have started writing, but I've got a few other things that are higher priority to get into the game at the moment. Not the next build, but the one that follows will likely be where the Talk option gets added to the game.
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