Current A:
    Traditional DNS notifications [RFC1996], which are here referred to
    as "NOTIFY(SOA)", are sent from a primary server to a secondary
    server, to minimize the latter's convergence time to a new version of
    the zone.

Current B:
    The basic idea was to augment
    the traditional "pull" mechanism (a periodic SOA query) with a "push"
    mechanism (a Notify) for a common case that was otherwise very
    inefficient (due to either slow convergence or wasteful and overly
    frequent scanning of the primary for changes).

Current C:
    This
    opens up the possibility of having an arbitrary party (e.g., a side-
    car service) send the notifications, enabling this functionality even
    before the emergence of native support in nameserver software.
-->

Instead of "native" (C), please use "built-in".

I have no suggestion for how to replace "traditional" (A and B).

I think A and B are fine. They're referring to practice within the IETF and DNS operations. I suppose you could change them to "existing" but that wouldn't be as clear.

Section 4.2
OLD (current, after RFC editing)
Therefore, it is RECOMMENDED that the child delay sending notifications
NEW
        Therefore, the child SHOULD delay sending notifications

(Rationale: currently, one may read "child delay" as a noun)

I would change the SHOULDs in 4.2 and 4.2.1 to MUST unless we can describe situations where interop would be better if you don't.

Pending resolution of that last suggestion, I approve everything else.

Regards,
John Levine, [email protected], Taughannock Networks, Trumansburg NY
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