Hi Sarah, > A) FYI, regarding: > > We updated "native" to "built-in" and "traditional" to "original". Please > verify.
I approve this change. > B) Regarding: > > Current: > Therefore, it is RECOMMENDED that the child delay sending > notifications to the recipient until a consistent public view of the > pertinent records is ensured. > > Perhaps: > Therefore, it is RECOMMENDED that the child would delay sending > notifications to the recipient until a consistent public view of the > pertinent records could be ensured. I approve this change. > Please review the document carefully to ensure satisfaction as we do not make > changes once it has been published as an RFC. > > For a clear record, please send approvals after viewing the document in its > current form. > > The updated files have been posted here (please refresh): > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9859.txt > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9859.pdf > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9859.html > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9859.xml > > The relevant diff files have been posted here (please refresh): > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9859-diff.html (comprehensive diff) > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9859-auth48diff.html (AUTH48 changes > only) I have reviewed the entire updated document and have no objections. That said, I do agree with Peter that his suggested change would be an improvement (but it is not a show-stopper): > CURRENT > For example, when receiving a NOTIFY(CDS) message for "example.com > <http://example.com/>" > with agent domain "errors.ns1.example.net > <http://errors.ns1.example.net/>", and when the requested DS > update is found to break the delegation, then the following report > query may be made (preferably over TCP): > > NEW > For example, when receiving a NOTIFY(CDS) message for "example.com > <http://example.com/>" > with agent domain "errors.ns1.example.net > <http://errors.ns1.example.net/>", and when the requested DS > update is found to break the delegation, then the following report > query with EDE code 6 (DNSSEC Bogus) may be made, preferably over TCP: Regards, Johan Stenstam
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