+1 Thanks, Jasdip
> On Oct 9, 2025, at 4:35 PM, Tom Harrison <[email protected]> wrote: > > Hi Alice, > >> On Thu, Oct 09, 2025 at 11:06:54AM -0700, Alice Russo wrote: >> Thank you for your replies; please see one follow-up below. The revised >> files are here (please refresh): >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9877.html >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9877.txt >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9877.pdf >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9877.xml >> >> This diff file shows all changes from the approved I-D: >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9877-diff.html >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9877-rfcdiff.html (side by side) >> >> This diff file shows the changes made during AUTH48 thus far: >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9877-auth48diff.html >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9877-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by side) >> >> Re: Section 1, in addition to removing 'they' as Tom requested, we've >> removed the comma and updated to 'features' plural. Previously, the comma >> indicated two independent clauses. >> >> Original: >> Indentation and whitespace in examples are provided only to >> illustrate element relationships, and are not a required feature of >> this specification. >> >> Current text: >> Indentation and whitespace in examples are provided only to >> illustrate element relationships and are not required features >> of this specification. >> >> Alternatively, please let us know if you prefer: >> In examples, indentation and whitespace are provided only to >> illustrate element relationships: neither is a required feature >> of this specification. >> >> We will wait to hear from you again and from your coauthors >> before continuing the publication process. This page shows >> the AUTH48 status of your document: >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9877 > > Thanks for these updates. The suggested text (i.e. "Indentation and > whitespace in examples are provided only to illustrate element > relationships and are not required features of this specification") > looks fine to me. I approve for publication. > > -Tom -- auth48archive mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
