Hi Adam,

Apologies for the delay.  We have updated the document and posted the revised 
files here:
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9882.xml
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9882.txt
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9882.pdf
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9882.html

Diffs highlighting the most recent udpates only: 
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9882-lastdiff.html
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9882-lastrfcdiff.html (side by side)

AUTH48 diffs: 
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9882-auth48diff.html
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9882-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by side)

Comprehensive diffs: 
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9882-diff.html
   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9882-rfcdiff.html (side by side)

Please review and let us know if any updates are needed or if you approve the 
RFC for publication. 

Thank you.
Sandy Ginoza
RFC Production Center



> On Oct 17, 2025, at 3:12 AM, Adam R <[email protected]> wrote:
> 
> One other small correction courtesy of Sean Turner - the abstract suggests 
> the public key syntax is included in the document, but we removed that when 
> it was moved to dilithium-certs instead.
> 
> OLD:
> In addition, the algorithm identifier and public key syntax are provided.
> 
> NEW:
> In addition, the algorithm identifier syntax is provided.
> 
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Adam
> 
> From: Adam R <[email protected]>
> Sent: Tuesday, October 14, 2025 16:00
> To: Deb Cooley <[email protected]>; Russ Housley <[email protected]>
> Cc: Sandy Ginoza <[email protected]>; Ben S3 <[email protected]>; 
> RFC Editor <[email protected]>; 
> [email protected] 
> <[email protected]>; [email protected] 
> <[email protected]>; [email protected] <[email protected]>; 
> [email protected] <[email protected]>
> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9882 <draft-ietf-lamps-cms-ml-dsa-07> for your 
> review
> 
> I did. I expect to approve once that's done, though.
> 
> I'll note that Daniel's on vacation this week, and Ben's away until the 23rd, 
> so I'll be the only author able to approve for a while.
> 
> From: Deb Cooley <[email protected]>
> Sent: Tuesday, October 14, 2025 15:56
> To: Russ Housley <[email protected]>
> Cc: Adam R <[email protected]>; Sandy Ginoza <[email protected]>; 
> Ben S3 <[email protected]>; RFC Editor <[email protected]>; 
> [email protected] 
> <[email protected]>; [email protected] 
> <[email protected]>; [email protected] <[email protected]>; 
> [email protected] <[email protected]>
> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9882 <draft-ietf-lamps-cms-ml-dsa-07> for your 
> review
> 
> And Adam asked for a change?
> 
> On Tue, Oct 14, 2025 at 8:08 AM Russ Housley <[email protected]> wrote:
> None of the authors have approved the draft yet.
> 
> See https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9882
> 
> Russ
> 
> 
> On Oct 14, 2025, at 7:21 AM, Deb Cooley <[email protected]> wrote:
> 
> Are we waiting on an update?  or approvals by authors?
> 
> Deb (attempting to not be twitchy)
> 
> On Fri, Oct 10, 2025 at 3:44 PM Adam R <[email protected]> wrote:
> Hi Sandy,
> 
> Sorry, one last thing I spotted. There's been an "is" added in Section 3.3 
> that changes the meaning of the text. The intended meaning is that the 
> security strength offered is either the digest algorithm's strength, or the 
> strength of the ML-DSA parameter set, depending on which value is lower. The 
> text change suggested below to reverts the change and suggests alternative 
> text to make this a bit clearer, but of course I'm happy for it to be tweaked 
> as is required: 
> 
> OLD: 
> The overall security strength offered by an ML-DSA signature calculated over 
> signed attributes is the floor of the digest algorithm's strength and is the 
> strength of the ML-DSA parameter set.
> 
> NEW:
> The overall security strength offered by an ML-DSA signature calculated over 
> signed attributes is constrained by either the digest algorithm's strength or 
> the strength of the ML-DSA parameter set, whichever is lower.
> 
> Otherwise, everything looks good to go to me.
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Adam
> 
> 
> 
> From: Sandy Ginoza <[email protected]>
> Sent: Friday, October 10, 2025 20:22
> To: Adam R <[email protected]>
> Cc: Ben S3 <[email protected]>; RFC Editor <[email protected]>; 
> [email protected] 
> <[email protected]>; [email protected] 
> <[email protected]>; [email protected] <[email protected]>; Russ 
> Housley <[email protected]>;[email protected] <[email protected]>; 
> [email protected] <[email protected]>
> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9882 <draft-ietf-lamps-cms-ml-dsa-07> for your 
> review
> 
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> 
> Hi Adam and Ben,
> 
> The document has been updated as described below.  The current files are 
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> Please review and let us if any further updates are needed or if you approve 
> the RFC for publication.
> 
> Thank you,
> Sandy Ginoza
> RFC Production Center
> 
> 
> 
> > On Oct 10, 2025, at 8:05 AM, Adam R <[email protected]> 
> > wrote:
> >
> > Hi Sandy,
> >
> >     • The authors (Ben included) have had a discussion on this and we think 
> > we can just remove "traditional" entirely; describing the algorithm as a 
> > "post-quantum" algorithm as we have elsewhere in the document conveys the 
> > intended meaning.
> >
> > OLD:
> > The Module-Lattice-Based Digital Signature Algorithm (ML-DSA) is a digital 
> > signature algorithm standardised by the US National Institute of Standards 
> > and Technology (NIST) as part of their post-quantum cryptography 
> > standardisation process.
> > It is intended to be secure against both "traditional" cryptographic 
> > attacks, as well as attacks utilising a quantum computer.
> >
> > NEW:
> > The Module-Lattice-Based Digital Signature Algorithm (ML-DSA) is a 
> > post-quantum digital signature algorithm standardised by the US National 
> > Institute of Standards and Technology (NIST) as part of their post-quantum 
> > cryptography standardisation process.
> >
> >     • We've discussed with the authors of dilithium-certs and Deb, and are 
> > content that the meaning of the text is the same in both instances and 
> > hence no wording changes are required.
> >
> >     • I also think this is fine.
> >
> >     • Base64-encoded examples seem somewhat rare in CMS RFCs, I had a quick 
> > look at recent examples and I only found RFC 9690. That RFC tags its 
> > examples as artwork. The examples in question aren't X.509, so I would 
> > leave them as-is or tag as artwork. If Russ has an opinion (as an author of 
> > RFC 9690 and many more CMS RFCs), I'd go with that.
> >
> >     • I agree with Ben.
> >
> > I agree with Ben's typo correction for Section 6, and suggest an additional 
> > change to give that table a title:
> > OLD:
> > <table anchor="oid">
> >   <thead>
> >     <tr>
> >       <th>Decimal</th>
> >       <th>Description</th>
> >       <th>Refernece</th>
> >     </tr>
> >   </thead>
> >   <tbody>
> >     <tr>
> >       <td>83</td>
> >       <td>id-mod-ml-dsa-2024</td>
> >       <td>RFC 9882</td>
> >     </tr>
> >   </tbody>
> > </table>
> >
> > NEW:
> > <table anchor="oid">
> >   <name>Object Identifier Assignments</name>
> >   <thead>
> >     <tr>
> >       <th>Decimal</th>
> >       <th>Description</th>
> >       <th>Reference</th>
> >     </tr>
> >   </thead>
> >   <tbody>
> >     <tr>
> >       <td>83</td>
> >       <td>id-mod-ml-dsa-2024</td>
> >       <td>RFC 9882</td>
> >     </tr>
> >   </tbody>
> > </table>
> >
> >
> > I would suggest one other grammatical change in Section 5:
> >
> > OLD:
> > If ML-DSA signing is implemented in a hardware device such as the hardware 
> > security module (HSM) or portable cryptographic token, implementers might 
> > want to avoid sending the full content to the device for performance 
> > reasons.
> >
> > NEW:
> > If ML-DSA signing is implemented in a hardware device such as a hardware 
> > security module (HSM) or a portable cryptographic token, implementers might 
> > want to avoid sending the full content to the device for performance 
> > reasons.
> >
> > Thanks,
> >
> > Adam
> >
> > From: Ben S3 <[email protected]>
> > Sent: Friday, October 10, 2025 08:15
> > To: [email protected] <[email protected]>; Adam R 
> > <[email protected]>; [email protected] 
> > <[email protected]>
> > Cc: [email protected] <[email protected]>; [email protected] 
> > <[email protected]>;[email protected] <[email protected]>; 
> > [email protected] <[email protected]>; [email protected] 
> > <[email protected]>
> > Subject: RE: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9882 <draft-ietf-lamps-cms-ml-dsa-07> for 
> > your review
> >
> > Thanks Sandy!
> >
> > To the specific points below:
> >
> > 1) Use of "Traditional" in our draft is intended to mirror the use of 
> > traditional in RFC 9794. Traditional cryptographic algorithms are meant to 
> > be secure against traditional cryptographic attacks, whereas PQ algorithms 
> > are secure against both traditional and quantum attacks. Whilst not 
> > explicitly defined, the terminology is precise enough that it is fully 
> > understood in the post-quantum context. I'd therefore leave it as it is.
> >
> > 2) I agree they should be the same, but I think I prefer our wording. I'll 
> > reach out to the authors of dilithium-certs.
> >
> > 3) Fine by me.
> >
> > 4) These are not X.509 artefacts, so I propose leaving the type attribute 
> > unset.
> >
> > 5) I've reviewed the guidance - I believe our document has no inclusivity 
> > concerns.
> >
> > Additional points:
> >
> > Section 6:
> >
> > OLD:
> >                +=========+====================+===========+
> >                | Decimal | Description        | Refernece |
> >                +=========+====================+===========+
> >                | 83      | id-mod-ml-dsa-2024 | RFC 9882  |
> >                +---------+--------------------+-----------+
> >
> > NEW:
> >                +=========+====================+===========+
> >                | Decimal | Description        | Reference |
> >                +=========+====================+===========+
> >                | 83      | id-mod-ml-dsa-2024 | RFC 9882  |
> >                +---------+--------------------+-----------+
> >
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: [email protected] <[email protected]>
> > Sent: 10 October 2025 00:56
> > To: Ben S3 <[email protected]>; Adam R <[email protected]>; 
> > [email protected]
> > Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected]; 
> > [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected]
> > Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9882 <draft-ietf-lamps-cms-ml-dsa-07> for 
> > your review
> >
> > Authors,
> >
> > While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) 
> > the following questions, which are also in the source file.
> >
> > 1) <!-- [rfced] We note that "traditional" is in quotes, but please 
> > consider whether it should be updated for clarity.  The term is ambiguous; 
> > "tradition" is a subjective term because it is not the same for everyone.
> >
> > Original:
> >    It is intended to be secure
> >    against both "traditional" cryptographic attacks, as well as attacks
> >    utilising a quantum computer.
> > -->
> >
> >
> > 2) <!-- [rfced] The following was provided in response to the intake form:
> >
> >    This document and draft-ietf-lamps-dilithium-certificates use
> >    the same text for one of the security considerations: "ML-DSA
> >    depends on high quality random numbers...". That paragraph
> >    should be kept the same between both documents.
> >
> > Should the paragraphs be identical?  They do not currently match.   Please
> > review and let us know how you would like to proceed.
> >
> > Currently in RFC-to-be 9881 <draft-ietf-lamps-dilithium-certificates>:
> >    ML-DSA depends on high quality random numbers that are suitable for
> >    use in cryptography.  The use of inadequate pseudo-random number
> >    generators (PRNGs) to generate such values can significantly
> >    undermine various security properties.  For instance, using an
> >    inadequate PRNG for key generation might allow an attacker to
> >    efficiently recover the private key by trying a small set of
> >    possibilities, rather than brute-force searching the whole keyspace.
> >    The generation of random numbers of a sufficient level of quality for
> >    use in cryptography is difficult; see Section 3.6.1 of [FIPS204] for
> >    some additional information.
> > -->
> >
> >
> > 3) <!-- [rfced] [CSOR]  FYI: We have updated the date for this reference 
> > from 20 August 2024 to 13 June 2025 to match the information provided at 
> > the URL.
> > -->
> >
> >
> > 4) <!-- [rfced] Regarding the text marked <sourcecode> and <artwork>, 
> > please review and let us know if any updates are needed.  The following was 
> > provided in response via the intake form:
> >
> >    The draft features an ASN.1 module that is tagged as source code
> >    in the XML. The module has been tested to confirm that it compiles.
> >    The draft also features example encodings in base64/PEM format and
> >    in a parsed representation. These are artefacts produced by an
> >    implementation rather than "source code" per se, so aren't tagged
> >    that way. Regardless, we've tested the examples against an independent
> >     implementation to make sure they work.
> >
> > Please consider whether some should be marked as "x509" for consistency 
> > with RFC-to-be 9881 <draft-ietf-lamps-dilithium-certificates>, as the 
> > authors of RFC 9881 provided the following guidance:
> >
> >   And the PEM examples in the Appendix C.3 can become type “x509”.
> >
> > RFC-to-be 9881 has not yet been updated.
> >
> > Note that the current list of preferred values for "type" is available at 
> > <https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.rfc-editor.org%2Frpc%2Fwiki%2Fdoku.php%3Fid%3Dsourcecode-types&data=05%7C02%7CAdam.r%40ncsc.gov.uk%7Cdb7d96e5cb2346297b2008de08332eaf%7C14aa5744ece1474ea2d734f46dda64a1%7C0%7C0%7C638957213268369318%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C40000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=%2FvZG8aXo3FUtJemb9RG3zCCB%2FHBv1ZzpBp0U%2BnfRTHU%3D&reserved=0>.
> > If the current list does not contain an applicable type, feel free to 
> > suggest additions for consideration. Note that it is also acceptable to 
> > leave the "type" attribute not set.
> > -->
> >
> >
> > 5) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the 
> > online Style Guide 
> > <https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.rfc-editor.org%2Fstyleguide%2Fpart2%2F%23inclusive_language&data=05%7C02%7CAdam.r%40ncsc.gov.uk%7Cdb7d96e5cb2346297b2008de08332eaf%7C14aa5744ece1474ea2d734f46dda64a1%7C0%7C0%7C638957213268382976%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C40000%7C%7C%7C&sdata=qC0%2BlreUc%2FAnrJptTYFtdKkcgFes%2FR6rq1W5fhaZoUs%3D&reserved=0>
> > and let us know if any changes are needed.  Updates of this nature 
> > typically result in more precise language, which is helpful for readers.
> >
> > Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but this should 
> > still be reviewed as a best practice.
> > -->
> >
> >
> > Thank you.
> > Sandy Ginoza
> > RFC Production Center
> >
> >
> >
> > On Oct 9, 2025, at 4:51 PM, [email protected] wrote:
> >
> > *****IMPORTANT*****
> >
> > Updated 2025/10/09
> >
> > RFC Author(s):
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> >
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> > --------------------------------------
> > RFC 9882 (draft-ietf-lamps-cms-ml-dsa-07)
> >
> > Title            : Use of the ML-DSA Signature Algorithm in the 
> > Cryptographic Message Syntax (CMS)
> > Author(s)        : B. Salter, A. Raine, D. Van Geest
> > WG Chair(s)      : Russ Housley, Tim Hollebeek
> > Area Director(s) : Deb Cooley, Paul Wouters


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