Hi Alanna,

Thanks! Looks good to me. I approve of this draft posted today, Dec 15.

Thanks!
neal


On Mon, Dec 15, 2025 at 2:05 PM Alanna Paloma <[email protected]>
wrote:

> Hi Gorry and Neal,
>
> Thank you for your replies. We have updated the files accordingly.
>
> > 2. Section 4, CURRENT:
> >     However, note that using PRR for cwnd reductions
> >     for the [RFC3168] variant of ECN has been observed, with some
> >     approaches to Active Queue Management (AQM), to cause an excess cwnd
> >     reduction during ECN-triggered congestion episodes, as noted in
> >     [VCC].
> > NEW:
> >      However, there can be interactions between using PRR and
> >      approaches to Active Queue Management (AQM) and ECN; guidance on the
> >      development and assessment of congestion control
> >      mechanisms is provided in [RFC9743].
> >
> > - RFC-Ed: Pleaase remove the reference to [VCC] from the references
> section.
>
> ) FYI, we have added [RFC9743] as an Informative Reference. Please let us
> know if it should be a Normative Reference instead.
>
>
> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9937.txt
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9937.pdf
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9937.html
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9937.xml
>
> The relevant diff files are posted here:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9937-diff.html (comprehensive diff)
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9937-auth48diff.html (all AUTH48
> changes)
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9937-lastdiff.html (last version to
> this one)
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9937-lastrfcdiff.html (rfcdiff
> between last version and this)
>
> Please see the AUTH48 status page for this document here:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9937
>
> We will await approval from Nandita prior to moving this document forward
> in the publication process.
>
> Best regards,
> Alanna Paloma
> RFC Production Center
>
> > On Dec 15, 2025, at 9:50 AM, Gorry Fairhurst <[email protected]>
> wrote:
> >
> > RFC-Ed, as per my previous email, here is the consolidated change list,
> please go-ahead and apply these changes:
> > 1. Section 4, CURRENT:
> >     such as for Explicit Congestion Notification (ECN) as
> >     described in [RFC3168].
> > NEW:
> >     such as for Explicit Congestion Notification (ECN) as
> >     specified in [RFC3168].
> >
> > 2. Section 4, CURRENT:
> >     However, note that using PRR for cwnd reductions
> >     for the [RFC3168] variant of ECN has been observed, with some
> >     approaches to Active Queue Management (AQM), to cause an excess cwnd
> >     reduction during ECN-triggered congestion episodes, as noted in
> >     [VCC].
> > NEW:
> >      However, there can be interactions between using PRR and
> >      approaches to Active Queue Management (AQM) and ECN; guidance on the
> >      development and assessment of congestion control
> >      mechanisms is provided in [RFC9743].
> >
> > - RFC-Ed: Pleaase remove the reference to [VCC] from the references
> section.
> >  3. Section 11.2, CURRENT:
> >     PRR only operates
> >     during a congestion control response episode, such as fast recovery
> >     or response to the [RFC3168] variant of ECN,
> > NEW:
> >     PRR only operates
> >     during a congestion control response episode, such as fast recovery
> >     or when there is a step reduction in the cwnd from the TCP ECN
> >     reaction defined in [RFC3168].
> > -END-
> > Gorry
> > (WIT AD)
> >
> >>
> >> >> On Dec 11, 2025, at 9:09 AM, Yuchung Cheng <[email protected]>
> wrote:
> >> >>
> >> >> Looks good to me. I approve the latest draft.
> >> >>
> >> >> On Wed, Dec 10, 2025 at 7:59 PM Neal Cardwell <[email protected]>
> wrote:
> >> >> Hi Alanna,
> >> >>
> >> >> Thanks! Looks great to me.
> >> >>
> >> >> I approve of this draft posted today, December 10.
> >> >>
> >> >> Everybody else, please review and chime in.
> >> >>
> >> >> Thanks!
> >> >> neal
> >> >>
> >> >>
> >> >> On Wed, Dec 10, 2025 at 8:01 PM Alanna Paloma <
> [email protected]> wrote:
> >> >> Hi Neal,
> >> >>
> >> >> The files have been updated per your request.
> >> >>
> >> >> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
> >> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9937.txt
> >> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9937.pdf
> >> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9937.html
> >> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9937.xml
> >> >>
> >> >> The relevant diff files are posted here:
> >> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9937-diff.html (comprehensive
> diff)
> >> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9937-auth48diff.html (all
> AUTH48 changes)
> >> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9937-lastdiff.html (last
> version to this one)
> >> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9937-lastrfcdiff.html
> (rfcdiff between last version and this)
> >> >>
> >> >> Please see the AUTH48 status page for this document here:
> >> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9937
> >> >>
> >> >> We will await approvals from each party listed on the AUTH48 status
> page below prior to moving this document forward in the publication process.
> >> >>
> >> >> Thank you,
> >> >> Alanna Paloma
> >> >> RFC Production Center
> >> >>
> >> >>
> >> >>
> >> >>> On Dec 10, 2025, at 3:59 PM, Neal Cardwell <[email protected]>
> wrote:
> >> >>>
> >> >>> Hi Alanna,
> >> >>>
> >> >>> I had 4 minor editing requests based on the December 3 version of
> the text:
> >> >>>
> >> >>> --- in "4.  Changes Relative to RFC 6937":
> >> >>>
> >> >>> rfc6937bis-21:
> >> >>>    using PRR for cwnd reductions for [RFC3168] ECN
> >> >>>
> >> >>> OLD:
> >> >>>    using PRR for cwnd reductions for ECN [RFC3168]
> >> >>>
> >> >>> NEW:
> >> >>>    using PRR for cwnd reductions for the [RFC3168] variant of ECN
> >> >>>
> >> >>> Rationale: IMHO the auth48 edit to use the phrase "ECN [RFC3168]"
> implies that there is only one version of ECN. However, there are at least
> 3: classic [RFC3168], DCTCP [RFC8257], and L4S [RFC9331]. Here  [RFC3168]
> is intended as an adjective clarifying which flavor of ECN we are
> discussing, not to indicate that ECN is only defined in [RFC3168].
> >> >>>
> >> >>> I'd suggest using the "the [RFC3168] variant of ECN" phrase that is
> currently in Section "11.2. Fairness".
> >> >>>
> >> >>> ---- in 6.2.  Per-ACK Steps
> >> >>>
> >> >>> rfc6937bis-21:
> >> >>>     Finally, the sender uses DeliveredData, inflight, SafeACK, and
> other
> >> >>>     PRR state to compute
> >> >>>     SndCnt, a local variable indicating exactly how
> >> >>>     many bytes should be sent in response to each ACK,
> >> >>>     and then uses SndCnt to update cwnd
> >> >>>
> >> >>> OLD:
> >> >>>     Finally, the sender uses DeliveredData, inflight, SafeACK, and
> other
> >> >>>     PRR state to compute
> >> >>>     SndCnt, a local variable indicating exactly how
> >> >>>     many bytes should be sent in response to each ACK
> >> >>>     and then uses SndCnt to update cwnd
> >> >>>
> >> >>> NEW:
> >> >>>     Finally, the sender uses DeliveredData, inflight, SafeACK, and
> other
> >> >>>     PRR state to compute
> >> >>>     SndCnt, a local variable indicating exactly how
> >> >>>     many bytes should be sent in response to each ACK,
> >> >>>     and then uses SndCnt to update cwnd
> >> >>>
> >> >>> Rationale: the phrase "a local variable indicating exactly how many
> bytes should be sent in response to each ACK" is a parenthetic or
> non-restrictive clause, so AFAIK should be enclosed with commas before and
> after. (Strunk & White Elements of Style rule: "Enclose parenthetic
> expressions between commas".)
> >> >>>
> >> >>> --- in 8.  Examples
> >> >>>
> >> >>> rfc6937bis-21:
> >> >>>    This section illustrates the PRR and [RFC6675] algorithms
> >> >>>
> >> >>> OLD:
> >> >>>    This section illustrates the PRR and [RFC6675] algorithm
> >> >>>
> >> >>> NEW:
> >> >>>    This section illustrates the PRR and [RFC6675] algorithms
> >> >>>
> >> >>> Rationale:
> >> >>> PRR and [RFC6675] are two different algorithms.
> >> >>>
> >> >>> --- in 14.2.  Informative References
> >> >>>
> >> >>> rfc6937bis-21:
> >> >>>    [FACK]    Mathis, M. and J. Mahdavi, "Forward Acknowledgment:
> >> >>>                Refining TCP Congestion Control", ACM SIGCOMM
> >> >>>                SIGCOMM1996, August 1996,
> >> >>>
> >> >>> OLD:
> >> >>>    [FACK]     Mathis, M. and J. Mahdavi, "Forward Acknowledgment:
> >> >>>                Refining TCP Congestion Control", ACM SIGCOMM
> Computer
> >> >>>                Communication Review, vol. 26, no. 4, pp. 281-291,
> >> >>>
> >> >>> NEW:
> >> >>>    [FACK]     Mathis, M. and J. Mahdavi, "Forward Acknowledgment:
> >> >>>                Refining TCP Congestion Control", SIGCOMM '96:
> Conference
> >> >>>                Proceedings on Applications, Technologies,
> Architectures,
> >> >>>                and Protocols for Computer Communications, pp.
> 281-291,
> >> >>>
> >> >>> Rationale: IMHO it's very useful/important to indicate that a paper
> is a SIGCOMM paper, so we should not drop the fact that the FACK paper was
> in SIGCOMM '96 (the list of SIGCOMM '96 papers is here:
> https://dl.acm.org/doi/proceedings/10.1145/248156 ). I'm suggesting the
> "NEW" text for indicating the paper was in SIGCOMM '96  based on the fact
> that [Hoe96Startup] was also in SIGCOMM '96; so I've just borrowed the
> SIGCOMM '96 citation text from [Hoe96Startup], which looks like:
> >> >>> [Hoe96Startup]
> >> >>> Hoe, J., "Improving the Start-up Behavior of a Congestion
> >> >>> Control Scheme for TCP", SIGCOMM '96: Conference
> >> >>> Proceedings on Applications, Technologies, Architectures,
> >> >>> and Protocols for Computer Communications, pp. 270-280,
> >> >>> DOI 10.1145/248157.248180, August 1996,
> >> >>> <https://doi.org/10.1145/248157.248180>.
> >> >>> (The confusion arises because SIGCOMM papers can be cited in two
> ways: (1) as in the SIGCOMM 'XY conference proceedings, or (2) as an issue
> of ACM SIGCOMM Computer Communication Review.)
> >> >>>
> >> >>> Thanks!
> >> >>>
> >> >>> neal
> >> >>>
> >> >>>
> >> >>> On Wed, Dec 10, 2025 at 5:14 PM Alanna Paloma <
> [email protected]> wrote:
> >> >>> Hi Matt,
> >> >>>
> >> >>> Thank you for your approval. It’s been noted on the AUTH48 status
> page:
> >> >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9937
> >> >>>
> >> >>> We will await approvals from Neal, Yuchung, and Nandita prior to
> moving this document forward in the publication process.
> >> >>>
> >> >>> Best regards,
> >> >>> Alanna Paloma
> >> >>> RFC Production Center
> >> >>>
> >> >>>> On Dec 10, 2025, at 7:54 AM, Matt Mathis <[email protected]>
> wrote:
> >> >>>>
> >> >>>> I approve of the draft posed Dec 3rd.
> >> >>>>
> >> >>>> Everybody else, please review and chime in.
> >> >>>>
> >> >>>> Thanks,
> >> >>>> --MM--
> >> >>>> Evil is defined by mortals who think they know "The Truth" and use
> force to apply it to others.
> >> >>>> -------------------------------------------
> >> >>>> Matt Mathis  (Email is best)
> >> >>>> Home & mobile: 412-654-7529 <(412)%20654-7529> please leave a
> message if you must call.
> >> >>>>
> >> >>>>
> >> >>>>
> >> >>>> On Wed, Dec 3, 2025 at 12:26 PM Alanna Paloma <
> [email protected]> wrote:
> >> >>>> Hi Neal and Gorry,
> >> >>>>
> >> >>>> Thank you for your replies. Gorry’s approval has been noted on the
> AUTH48 status page:
> >> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9937
> >> >>>>
> >> >>>>> One preliminary meta-note about process:
> >> >>>>>
> >> >>>>>>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9937-auth48diff.html
> (all AUTH48 changes)
> >> >>>>> FWIW, AFAICT this version does not include all auth48 changes.
> One change I noticed that it does not include is the following:
> >> >>>>>
> >> >>>>> rfc6937bis-21:
> >> >>>>>    using [RFC6675] loss detection
> >> >>>>>    MAY use the "pipe" algorithm as specified in [RFC6675]
> >> >>>>>
> >> >>>>> latest auth48 version:
> >> >>>>>    using loss detection [RFC6675]
> >> >>>>>    MAY use the "pipe" algorithm as specified in [RFC6675]
> >> >>>> ) To clarify, the -auth48diff file only highlights changes after a
> document has moved into AUTH48 state. The change you noted was not
> highlighted in the -auth48diff file (it's now highlighted as we have
> reverted our initial edit per your request) because it was made by editors
> prior to the document entering AUTH48 state.
> >> >>>>
> >> >>>> To see all edits made, including those made before and during
> AUTH48 state, see this file:
> >> >>>>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9937-diff.html
> (comprehensive diff)
> >> >>>>
> >> >>>> We have updated the files per your request.
> >> >>>>
> >> >>>> The files have been posted here (please refresh):
> >> >>>>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9937.txt
> >> >>>>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9937.pdf
> >> >>>>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9937.html
> >> >>>>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9937.xml
> >> >>>>
> >> >>>> The relevant diff files are posted here:
> >> >>>>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9937-diff.html
> (comprehensive diff)
> >> >>>>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9937-auth48diff.html (all
> AUTH48 changes)
> >> >>>>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9937-lastdiff.html (last
> version to this one)
> >> >>>>   https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9937-lastrfcdiff.html
> (rfcdiff between last version and this)
> >> >>>>
> >> >>>> We will await any further changes you may have and approvals from
> each author prior to moving forward in the publication process.
> >> >>>>
> >> >>>> Please see the AUTH48 status page for this document here:
> >> >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9937
> >> >>>>
> >> >>>> Thank you,
> >> >>>> Alanna Paloma
> >> >>>> RFC Production Center
> >> >>>>
> >> >>>>
> >> >>>>> On Dec 3, 2025, at 6:29 AM, Neal Cardwell <[email protected]>
> wrote:
> >> >>>>>
> >> >>>>> Hi editors and co-authors,
> >> >>>>>
> >> >>>>> I had time to review the auth48 edits this morning, and have some
> proposed edits.
> >> >>>>>
> >> >>>>> One preliminary meta-note about process:
> >> >>>>>
> >> >>>>>>    https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9937-auth48diff.html
> (all AUTH48 changes)
> >> >>>>> FWIW, AFAICT this version does not include all auth48 changes.
> One change I noticed that it does not include is the following:
> >> >>>>>
> >> >>>>> rfc6937bis-21:
> >> >>>>>    using [RFC6675] loss detection
> >> >>>>>    MAY use the "pipe" algorithm as specified in [RFC6675]
> >> >>>>>
> >> >>>>> latest auth48 version:
> >> >>>>>    using loss detection [RFC6675]
> >> >>>>>    MAY use the "pipe" algorithm as specified in [RFC6675]
> >> >>>>>
> >> >>>>> Here are a few edits I'd like to request, tweaking the edits made
> during the auth48 process:
> >> >>>>>
> >> >>>>> ---
> >> >>>>>
> >> >>>>> rfc6937bis-21:
> >> >>>>>    using [RFC6675] loss detection
> >> >>>>>    MAY use the "pipe" algorithm as specified in [RFC6675]
> >> >>>>>
> >> >>>>> OLD:
> >> >>>>>    using loss detection [RFC6675]
> >> >>>>>    MAY use the "pipe" algorithm as specified in [RFC6675]
> >> >>>>>
> >> >>>>> NEW:
> >> >>>>>    using [RFC6675] loss detection
> >> >>>>>    MAY use the "pipe" algorithm as specified in [RFC6675]
> >> >>>>>
> >> >>>>> Rationale: IMHO the auth48 edit to employ the phrase "using loss
> detection [RFC6675]" implies that loss detection necessarily means
> [RFC6675], or is only defined in [RFC6675]. However, there are multiple
> widely-deployed loss recovery algorithms (notably [RFC6675] and [RFC8985]),
> and this paragraph we are specifically discussing  how to adapt PRR's use
> of the "inflight" quantity to both of those algorithms, and in this
> sentence we are discussing how to  adapt PRR's use of the "inflight"
> quantity to [RFC6675] loss detection, so it's important not to imply that
> loss detection is only defined in [RFC6675].
> >> >>>>>
> >> >>>>> ---
> >> >>>>>
> >> >>>>> rfc6937bis-21:
> >> >>>>>    Finally, the sender uses DeliveredData, inflight, SafeACK, and
> other
> >> >>>>>    PRR state to compute SndCnt
> >> >>>>>
> >> >>>>> OLD:
> >> >>>>>    Finally, the sender uses DeliveredData, inflight, SafeACK, and
> other
> >> >>>>>    PRR states to compute SndCnt
> >> >>>>>
> >> >>>>> NEW:
> >> >>>>>    Finally, the sender uses DeliveredData, inflight, SafeACK, and
> other
> >> >>>>>    PRR state to compute SndCnt
> >> >>>>>
> >> >>>>> Rationale: IMHO the auth48 edit to use "states" implies that
> DeliveredData, inflight, SafeACK are names of "states" in a state machine.
> However, those are the names of "state" variables representing the "state"
> of the algorithm, not the names of "states" in a state machine.
> >> >>>>>
> >> >>>>> ---
> >> >>>>>
> >> >>>>> rfc6937bis-21:
> >> >>>>>     Earlier measurements (in section 6 of [RFC6675]) indicate that
> >> >>>>>     [RFC6675] significantly outperforms [RFC6937] PRR
> >> >>>>>     using only PRR-CRB
> >> >>>>>
> >> >>>>> OLD:
> >> >>>>>     Earlier measurements (in Section 6 of [RFC6675]) indicate that
> >> >>>>>     [RFC6675] significantly outperforms PRR [RFC6937]
> >> >>>>>     using only PRR-CRB
> >> >>>>>
> >> >>>>> NEW:
> >> >>>>>     Earlier measurements (in Section 6 of [RFC6675]) indicate that
> >> >>>>>     [RFC6675] significantly outperforms the [RFC6937] version of
> PRR
> >> >>>>>     using only PRR-CRB
> >> >>>>>
> >> >>>>> Rationale: IMHO the auth48 edit to use the phrase "outperforms
> PRR [RFC6937]" (a) implies that PRR is only described by [RFC6937], and (b)
> states that  "[RFC6675] significantly outperforms PRR". Both implications
> are incorrect. For (a), there are two versions of PRR: one in the old
> [RFC6937] and one in the new [RFC9937], and we used the phrase "[RFC6937]
> PRR" to clarify which version we are talking about. For (b), the new
> version of PRR outperforms [RFC6675], which is why we are bothering to
> standardize it. :-)  Note that in this passage, we are discussing
> differences between the [RFC6937] version of PRR and the new [RFC9937]
> version of PRR. So in this context it is important to clarify that PRR is
> *not* synonymous with [RFC6937]; there are two different versions of PRR:
> original [RFC6937] and new [RFC9937]. [RFC6675] outperforms one variant of
> the original  [RFC6937] PRR, but not the new version of PRR in [RFC9937].
> To my mind, the suggested NEW text clarifies that this passage is referring
> to the [RFC6937] PRR variant.
> >> >>>>>
> >> >>>>> ---
> >> >>>>> rfc6937bis-21:
> >> >>>>>    response to [RFC3168] ECN
> >> >>>>>
> >> >>>>> OLD:
> >> >>>>>    response to ECN [RFC3168]
> >> >>>>>
> >> >>>>> NEW:
> >> >>>>>    response to the [RFC3168] variant of ECN
> >> >>>>>
> >> >>>>> Rationale: IMHO the auth48 edit to use the phrase "ECN [RFC3168]"
> implies that there is only one version of ECN. However, there are at least
> 3: classic [RFC3168], DCTCP [RFC8257], and L4S [RFC9331]. Here  [RFC3168]
> is intended as an adjective clarifying which flavor of ECN we are
> discussing, not to indicate that ECN is only defined in [RFC3168].
> >> >>>>>
> >> >>>>> ---
> >> >>>>>
> >> >>>>> Thanks!
> >> >>>>>
> >> >>>>> neal
> >> >>>>>
> >> >>>>>
> >> >>>>> On Wed, Dec 3, 2025 at 3:47 AM Gorry Fairhurst <
> [email protected]> wrote:
> >> >>>>> On 01/12/2025 23:08, Alanna Paloma wrote:
> >> >>>>>> Hi Authors and Gorry (AD)*,
> >> >>>>>>
> >> >>>>>> *Gorry - As the AD, please review and approve the deleted text
> in Section 7.
> >> >>>>> I have now read this and this is descriptive text about the
> properties.
> >> >>>>>
> >> >>>>> I APPROVE this change,
> >> >>>>>
> >> >>>>> Thanks,
> >> >>>>>
> >> >>>>> Gorry
> >> >>>>>
> >> >>>>>> For context, here is the authors’ explanation:
> >> >>>>>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] May we clarify "[RFC6675] 'half window of
> silence'" as
> >> >>>>>>> follows?
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> Original:
> >> >>>>>>>      The [RFC6675] "half window of silence" may temporarily
> >> >>>>>>>      reduce queue pressure when congestion control does not
> reduce the
> >> >>>>>>>      congestion window entering recovery to avoid further
> losses.
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> Perhaps:
> >> >>>>>>>      The "half window of silence" that a SACK-based
> Conservative Loss
> >> >>>>>>>      Recovery Algorithm [RFC6675] experiences may temporarily
> >> >>>>>>>      reduce queue pressure when congestion control does not
> reduce the
> >> >>>>>>>      congestion window entering recovery to avoid further
> losses.
> >> >>>>>>> -->
> >> >>>>>>> We want to delete the last three sentences of this paragraph.
> They got garbled and don't belong here anyhow.   This restores the text as
> it was RFC 6937.
> >> >>>>>>> OLD:
> >> >>>>>>>      The [RFC6675] "half window of silence" may temporarily
> reduce queue pressure when congestion control does not reduce the
> congestion window entering recovery to avoid further losses. The goal of
> PRR is to minimize the opportunities to lose the self clock by smoothly
> controlling inflight toward the target set by the congestion control. It is
> the congestion control's responsibility to avoid a full queue, not PRR.
> >> >>>>>>> NEW:
> >> >>>>>>>      (DELETED)
> >> >>>>>> See this diff file:
> >> >>>>>>     https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9937-auth48diff.html
> >> >>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>
> >> >>>>>> Authors - Thank you for your replies.  We have updated as
> requested.
> >> >>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> We could use some advice on keywords.  Can you tell us the
> keywords associated with RFC 5681 and RFC 6675?
> >> >>>>>> ) The keywords for RFCs 5681 and 6675 can be seen here:
> >> >>>>>>
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/search/rfc_search_detail.php?rfc=5681&keywords=keyson
> >> >>>>>>
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/search/rfc_search_detail.php?rfc=6675&keywords=keyson
> >> >>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> 3) <!--[rfced] To have the abbreviation directly match the
> expanded form,
> >> >>>>>>> may we update this text as follows?
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> Original:
> >> >>>>>>>      As a baseline, to be cautious when there may be
> >> >>>>>>>      considerable congestion, PRR uses its Conservative
> Reduction Bound
> >> >>>>>>>      (PRR-CRB), which is strictly packet conserving.  When
> recovery seems
> >> >>>>>>>      to be progressing well, PRR uses its Slow Start Reduction
> Bound (PRR-
> >> >>>>>>>      SSRB), which is more aggressive than PRR-CRB by at most
> one segment
> >> >>>>>>>      per ACK.
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> Perhaps:
> >> >>>>>>>      As a baseline, to be cautious when there may be
> >> >>>>>>>      considerable congestion, PRR uses its Conservative
> Reduction Bound
> >> >>>>>>>      (CRB), which is strictly packet conserving.  When recovery
> seems
> >> >>>>>>>      to be progressing well, PRR uses its Slow Start Reduction
> Bound (SSRB),
> >> >>>>>>>      which is more aggressive than PRR-CRB by at most one
> segment
> >> >>>>>>>      per ACK.
> >> >>>>>>> -->
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> Yes this is good, for this paragraph only.  I'm confirming that
> the rest of the document will continue to use PRR-SSRB and PRR-CRB.
> Correct?
> >> >>>>>> ) Yes, all other instances of “PRR-SSRB” and “PRR-CRB” will
> remain as is.
> >> >>>>>>
> >> >>>>>> ---
> >> >>>>>>    The files have been posted here (please refresh):
> >> >>>>>>     https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9937.txt
> >> >>>>>>     https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9937.pdf
> >> >>>>>>     https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9937.html
> >> >>>>>>     https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9937.xml
> >> >>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>    The relevant diff files are posted here:
> >> >>>>>>     https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9937-diff.html
> (comprehensive diff)
> >> >>>>>>     https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9937-auth48diff.html
> (all AUTH48 changes)
> >> >>>>>>
> >> >>>>>> Please review the document carefully as documents do not change
> once published as RFCs.
> >> >>>>>>
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> process.
> >> >>>>>>
> >> >>>>>> Please see the AUTH48 status page for this document here:
> >> >>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9937
> >> >>>>>>
> >> >>>>>> Thank you,
> >> >>>>>> Alanna Paloma
> >> >>>>>> RFC Production Center
> >> >>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> On Dec 1, 2025, at 11:51 AM, Matt Mathis <[email protected]>
> wrote:
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> Sorry, I missed reply-all.
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> Our adjustments to you edits are inline below.
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> On Fri, Nov 21, 2025 at 3:50 PM <[email protected]>
> wrote:
> >> >>>>>>> Authors,
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as
> necessary)
> >> >>>>>>> the following questions, which are also in the source file.
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> Add PRR as an official abbreviation in the title
> >> >>>>>>> OLD:
> >> >>>>>>> <title abbrev="Proportional Rate Reduction"> Proportional Rate
> Reduction</title>
> >> >>>>>>> NEW:
> >> >>>>>>> <title abbrev="PRR"> Proportional Rate Reduction (PRR)</title>
> >> >>>>>>>    Update my email address
> >> >>>>>>> OLD:
> >> >>>>>>> <email>[email protected]</email>
> >> >>>>>>> NEW:
> >> >>>>>>> <email>[email protected]</email>
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that
> appear in
> >> >>>>>>> the title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. -->
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> We could use some advice on keywords.  Can you tell us the
> keywords associated with RFC 5681 and RFC 6675?
> >> >>>>>>> Tentatively:
> >> >>>>>>> OLD:
> >> >>>>>>> <keyword>example</keyword>
> >> >>>>>>> NEW:
> >> >>>>>>> <keyword>loss recovery, SACK, self clock, fast retransmit, fast
> recovery</keyword>
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> 2) <!-- [rfced] "Reno" is not used in RFC 5681, except in
> titles in the
> >> >>>>>>> References section. Please review and let us know if/how this
> citation
> >> >>>>>>> should be updated. Note that there are multiple occurrences of
> this
> >> >>>>>>> throughout the document.
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> Original:
> >> >>>>>>>      Congestion control algorithms like Reno [RFC5681] and
> CUBIC [RFC9438]
> >> >>>>>>>      are built on the conceptual foundation of this self clock
> process.
> >> >>>>>>> -->
> >> >>>>>>> No changes to the citation for Reno [RFC 5681] here or
> elsewhere.   Many other documents that use this citation.
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> Reno was the genesis of modern Internet congestion control, and
> as such it is the foundation of RFC 5681 and nearly all work in ICCRG,
> CCWG, and much of TCPM.  However, Reno was never properly described in any
> documents, as a proposed standard or otherwise. If it had been, RFC 5681
> (and all of its predecessors) would almost certainly be described as
> updating Reno.
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> 3) <!--[rfced] To have the abbreviation directly match the
> expanded form,
> >> >>>>>>> may we update this text as follows?
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> Original:
> >> >>>>>>>      As a baseline, to be cautious when there may be
> >> >>>>>>>      considerable congestion, PRR uses its Conservative
> Reduction Bound
> >> >>>>>>>      (PRR-CRB), which is strictly packet conserving.  When
> recovery seems
> >> >>>>>>>      to be progressing well, PRR uses its Slow Start Reduction
> Bound (PRR-
> >> >>>>>>>      SSRB), which is more aggressive than PRR-CRB by at most
> one segment
> >> >>>>>>>      per ACK.
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> Perhaps:
> >> >>>>>>>      As a baseline, to be cautious when there may be
> >> >>>>>>>      considerable congestion, PRR uses its Conservative
> Reduction Bound
> >> >>>>>>>      (CRB), which is strictly packet conserving.  When recovery
> seems
> >> >>>>>>>      to be progressing well, PRR uses its Slow Start Reduction
> Bound (SSRB),
> >> >>>>>>>      which is more aggressive than PRR-CRB by at most one
> segment
> >> >>>>>>>      per ACK.
> >> >>>>>>> -->
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> Yes this is good, for this paragraph only.  I'm confirming that
> the rest of the document will continue to use PRR-SSRB and PRR-CRB.
> Correct?
> >> >>>>>>> (Changes as above)
> >> >>>>>>>    OLD:
> >> >>>>>>>      As a baseline, to be cautious when there may be
> >> >>>>>>>      considerable congestion, PRR uses its Conservative
> Reduction Bound
> >> >>>>>>>      (PRR-CRB), which is strictly packet conserving.  When
> recovery seems
> >> >>>>>>>      to be progressing well, PRR uses its Slow Start Reduction
> Bound (PRR-
> >> >>>>>>>      SSRB), which is more aggressive than PRR-CRB by at most
> one segment
> >> >>>>>>>      per ACK.
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> NEW:
> >> >>>>>>>      As a baseline, to be cautious when there may be
> >> >>>>>>>      considerable congestion, PRR uses its Conservative
> Reduction Bound
> >> >>>>>>>      (CRB), which is strictly packet conserving.  When recovery
> seems
> >> >>>>>>>      to be progressing well, PRR uses its Slow Start Reduction
> Bound (SSRB),
> >> >>>>>>>      which is more aggressive than PRR-CRB by at most one
> segment
> >> >>>>>>>      per ACK.
> >> >>>>>>> 4) <!--[rfced] To avoid awkward hyphenation of an RFC citation,
> may we
> >> >>>>>>> rephrase the latter part of this sentence as follows?
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> Original:
> >> >>>>>>>      Since [RFC6937] was written, PRR has also been adapted to
> perform
> >> >>>>>>>      multiplicative window reduction for non-loss based
> congestion control
> >> >>>>>>>      algorithms, such as for [RFC3168] style Explicit Congestion
> >> >>>>>>>      Notification (ECN).
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> Perhaps:
> >> >>>>>>>      Since [RFC6937] was written, PRR has also been adapted to
> perform
> >> >>>>>>>      multiplicative window reduction for non-loss-based
> congestion control
> >> >>>>>>>      algorithms, such as for Explicit Congestion Notification
> (ECN) as
> >> >>>>>>>      described in [RFC3168].
> >> >>>>>>> -->
> >> >>>>>>> Yes this is good.  As above.
> >> >>>>>>> OLD:
> >> >>>>>>>      Since [RFC6937] was written, PRR has also been adapted to
> perform
> >> >>>>>>>      multiplicative window reduction for non-loss based
> congestion control
> >> >>>>>>>      algorithms, such as for [RFC3168] style Explicit Congestion
> >> >>>>>>>      Notification (ECN).
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> NEW:
> >> >>>>>>>      Since [RFC6937] was written, PRR has also been adapted to
> perform
> >> >>>>>>>      multiplicative window reduction for non-loss-based
> congestion control
> >> >>>>>>>      algorithms, such as for Explicit Congestion Notification
> (ECN) as
> >> >>>>>>>      described in [RFC3168].
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> 5) <!--[rfced] To improve readability, may we add parentheses
> in this
> >> >>>>>>> sentence? Please review and let us know if thus suggested update
> >> >>>>>>> retains the intended meaning.
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> Original:
> >> >>>>>>>      In recovery without SACK, DeliveredData is estimated to be
> >> >>>>>>>      1 SMSS on receiving a duplicate ACK, and on a subsequent
> partial or
> >> >>>>>>>      full ACK DeliveredData is the change in SND.UNA, minus 1
> SMSS for
> >> >>>>>>>      each preceding duplicate ACK.
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> NO we want a different change Perhaps:
> >> >>>>>>>      In recovery without SACK, DeliveredData is estimated to be
> >> >>>>>>>      1 SMSS on receiving a duplicate ACK (and the change is in
> SND.UNA on
> >> >>>>>>>      a subsequent partial or full ACK DeliveredData), minus 1
> SMSS for
> >> >>>>>>>      each preceding duplicate ACK.
> >> >>>>>>> -->
> >> >>>>>>> OLD:
> >> >>>>>>>      In recovery without SACK, DeliveredData is estimated to be
> >> >>>>>>>      1 SMSS on receiving a duplicate ACK, and on a subsequent
> partial or
> >> >>>>>>>      full ACK DeliveredData is the change in SND.UNA, minus 1
> SMSS for
> >> >>>>>>>      each preceding duplicate ACK.
> >> >>>>>>> NEW:
> >> >>>>>>>      In recovery without SACK, DeliveredData is estimated to be
> >> >>>>>>>      1 SMSS on each received duplicate ACK (i.e. SND.UNA did
> not change).
> >> >>>>>>>      When SND.UNA advances (i.e a full or partial ACK)
> >> >>>>>>>      DeliveredData is the change in SND.UNA, minus 1 SMSS for
> >> >>>>>>>      each preceding duplicate ACKs.
> >> >>>>>>> New edit, XML line 331, second paragraph of section 6.2.  (This
> is a revision of an rfc-editor change.)
> >> >>>>>>> OLD:
> >> >>>>>>> (signed) change in SACK.
> >> >>>>>>> NEW:
> >> >>>>>>> signed change in quantity of data marked SACKed in the
> scoreboard.
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] May we clarify "[RFC6675] 'half window of
> silence'" as
> >> >>>>>>> follows?
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> Original:
> >> >>>>>>>      The [RFC6675] "half window of silence" may temporarily
> >> >>>>>>>      reduce queue pressure when congestion control does not
> reduce the
> >> >>>>>>>      congestion window entering recovery to avoid further
> losses.
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> Perhaps:
> >> >>>>>>>      The "half window of silence" that a SACK-based
> Conservative Loss
> >> >>>>>>>      Recovery Algorithm [RFC6675] experiences may temporarily
> >> >>>>>>>      reduce queue pressure when congestion control does not
> reduce the
> >> >>>>>>>      congestion window entering recovery to avoid further
> losses.
> >> >>>>>>> -->
> >> >>>>>>> We want to delete the last three sentences of this paragraph.
> They got garbled and don't belong here anyhow.   This restores the text as
> it was RFC 6937.
> >> >>>>>>> OLD:
> >> >>>>>>>      The [RFC6675] "half window of silence" may temporarily
> reduce queue pressure when congestion control does not reduce the
> congestion window entering recovery to avoid further losses. The goal of
> PRR is to minimize the opportunities to lose the self clock by smoothly
> controlling inflight toward the target set by the congestion control. It is
> the congestion control's responsibility to avoid a full queue, not PRR.
> >> >>>>>>> NEW:
> >> >>>>>>>      (DELETED)
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> 7) <!--[rfced] FYI - We found free access versions of these
> references in
> >> >>>>>>> the ACM Digital Library and added DOIs and URLs to these
> references.
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> Current:
> >> >>>>>>>      [Flach2016policing]
> >> >>>>>>>                 Flach, T., Papageorge, P., Terzis, A., Pedrosa,
> L., Cheng,
> >> >>>>>>>                 Y., Karim, T., Katz-Bassett, E., and R.
> Govindan, "An
> >> >>>>>>>                 Internet-Wide Analysis of Traffic Policing",
> SIGCOMM '16:
> >> >>>>>>>                 Proceedings of the 2016 ACM SIGCOMM Conference,
> pp.
> >> >>>>>>>                 468-482, DOI 10.1145/2934872.2934873, August
> 2016,
> >> >>>>>>>                 <https://doi.org/10.1145/2934872.2934873>.
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>>      [Hoe96Startup]
> >> >>>>>>>                 Hoe, J., "Improving the Start-up Behavior of a
> Congestion
> >> >>>>>>>                 Control Scheme for TCP", SIGCOMM '96: Conference
> >> >>>>>>>                 Proceedings on Applications, Technologies,
> Architectures,
> >> >>>>>>>                 and Protocols for Computer Communications, pp.
> 270-280,
> >> >>>>>>>                 DOI 10.1145/248157.248180, August 1996,
> >> >>>>>>>                 <https://doi.org/10.1145/248157.248180>.
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>>      [IMC11]    Dukkipati, N., Mathis, M., Cheng, Y., and M.
> Ghobadi,
> >> >>>>>>>                 "Proportional Rate Reduction for TCP", IMC '11:
> >> >>>>>>>                 Proceedings of the 2011 ACM SIGCOMM Conference
> on Internet
> >> >>>>>>>                 Measurement Conference, pp. 155-170,
> >> >>>>>>>                 DOI 10.1145/2068816.2068832, November 2011,
> >> >>>>>>>                 <https://doi.org/10.1145/2068816.2068832>.
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>>      [Jacobson88]
> >> >>>>>>>                 Jacobson, V., "Congestion Avoidance and
> Control",
> >> >>>>>>>                 Symposium proceedings on Communications
> architectures and
> >> >>>>>>>                 protocols (SIGCOMM '88), pp. 314-329,
> >> >>>>>>>                 DOI 10.1145/52325.52356, August 1988,
> >> >>>>>>>                 <https://doi.org/10.1145/52325.52356>.
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>>      [Savage99] Savage, S., Cardwell, N., Wetherall, D., and T.
> Anderson,
> >> >>>>>>>                 "TCP Congestion Control with a Misbehaving
> Receiver", ACM
> >> >>>>>>>                 SIGCOMM Computer Communication Review, vol. 29,
> no. 5, pp.
> >> >>>>>>>                 71-78, DOI 10.1145/505696.505704, October 1999,
> >> >>>>>>>                 <https://doi.org/10.1145/505696.505704>.
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>>      [VCC]      Cronkite-Ratcliff, B., Bergman, A., Vargaftik,
> S., Ravi,
> >> >>>>>>>                 M., McKeown, N., Abraham, I., and I. Keslassy,
> >> >>>>>>>                 "Virtualized Congestion Control (Extended
> Version)",
> >> >>>>>>>                 SIGCOMM '16: Proceedings of the 2016 ACM SIGCOMM
> >> >>>>>>>                 Conference pp. 230-243, DOI
> 10.1145/2934872.2934889,
> >> >>>>>>>                 August 2016, <
> http://www.ee.technion.ac.il/~isaac/p/
> >> >>>>>>>                 sigcomm16_vcc_extended.pdf>.
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> -->
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> Thank you, Free access is goot!
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> 8) <!-- [rfced] Some author comments are present in the XML.
> Please confirm
> >> >>>>>>> that no updates related to these comments are outstanding. Note
> that the
> >> >>>>>>> comments will be deleted prior to publication.
> >> >>>>>>> -->
> >> >>>>>>> Yes, We got that.
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> 9) <!-- [rfced] Abbreviations
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> a) FYI - We have added expansions for the following
> abbreviations
> >> >>>>>>> per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC Style Guide"). Please review
> each
> >> >>>>>>> expansion in the document carefully to ensure correctness.
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>>    Content Delivery Network (CDN)
> >> >>>>>>>    Forward Acknowledgment (FACK)
> >> >>>>>>>    Recent Acknowledgment Tail Loss Probe (RACK-TLP)
> >> >>>>>>>    Consistent use of CDN, FACK and RACK-TLP are good.
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> b) Both the expansion and the acronym for the following term
> are used
> >> >>>>>>> throughout the document. Would you like to update to use the
> expansion upon
> >> >>>>>>> first usage and the acronym for the rest of the document?
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> round-trip time (RTT)
> >> >>>>>>> -->Note that "round-trip time" is only used for the very high
> level description of PRR.  A round trip, as marked by an event (the arrival
> of an ACK, rather than the passing of time), is correct and not abbreviated
> RTT.   No changes.
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> 10) <!--[rfced] Throughout the text, the following terminology
> appears to
> >> >>>>>>> be used inconsistently. May we update each to the form on the
> right?
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>>    Fast Retransmit > fast retransmit
> >> >>>>>>>    limited transmit > Limited Transmit
> >> >>>>>>> -->
> >> >>>>>>> No changes please:  The capitalized terms are proper names and
> used to refer to the algorithms themselves.  Lower case is used in running
> prose to refer to packets triggered by the algorithms.   e.g. the fast
> retransmit is the packet triggered by the Fast Retransmit algorithm.
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> 11) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion
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> >> >>>>>>> and let us know if any changes are needed.  Updates of this
> nature
> >> >>>>>>> typically result in more precise language, which is helpful for
> readers.
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but
> this should
> >> >>>>>>> still be reviewed as a best practice.
> >> >>>>>>> -->
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> We concur.  Inclusivity is important.
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> Thank you.
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> Alanna Paloma and Sandy Ginoza
> >> >>>>>>> RFC Production Center
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> End of markups, and Thank You!
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> On Nov 21, 2025, at 3:46 PM, [email protected] wrote:
> >> >>>>>>>
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> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> --------------------------------------
> >> >>>>>>> RFC 9937 (draft-ietf-tcpm-prr-rfc6937bis-21)
> >> >>>>>>>
> >> >>>>>>> Title            : Proportional Rate Reduction
> >> >>>>>>> Author(s)        : M. Mathis, N. Cardwell, Y. Cheng, N.
> Dukkipati
> >> >>>>>>> WG Chair(s)      : Yoshifumi Nishida, Michael Tüxen
> >> >>>>>>>
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