Hi David,

Apologies! The change in Appendix A should appear now. 

Files (please refresh):
 https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9908.txt
 https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9908.pdf
 https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9908.html
 https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9908.xml
 https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9908-diff.html
 https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9908-rfcdiff.html (side by side)
 https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9908-auth48diff.html
 https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9908-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by side)

Thank you!

Madison Church
RFC Production Center

> On Dec 23, 2025, at 2:00 PM, David von Oheimb <[email protected]> wrote:
> 
> Thank you Madison for your two today's responses,
> on both of which I comment below.
> 
> On 23.12.25 19:51, Madison Church wrote:
>> Per internal discussion with RPAT, we have added "base64" to the list of 
>> sourcecode types. Thus, we have left the sourcecode types as is in sections 
>> 5.1.1, 5.2.1, 5.3.1, 5.4.1, 5.5.1, and 5.6. We did not include DER, as we 
>> believe we should avoid indicating what is inside the base64.
>> 
>> We ask that at least one author verify that base64 is acceptable before 
>> moving forward with the publication process.
> If the sourcecode type just governs how the contents are presented in the 
> RFC, which I believe is the case,
> "base64" alone is sufficient because only the encoded bytes get printed,
> and this output is independent of the structure of the encoded contents.
> 
> 
>>> On Dec 23, 2025, at 11:54 AM, Madison Church <[email protected]> 
>>> wrote:
>>> 
>>> David - Thank you for your reply! We have updated the document with your 
>>> suggestion and noted your approval on the AUTH48 status page (see 
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9908).
>>> 
>>> The files have been posted here:
>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9908.txt
> For whatever reason, I do not (yet) see any update on the first paragraph of 
> Appendix A.
> Looks like due to some mistake/glitch the suggested change was not actually 
> executed so far.
> Regards,
>     David
> 
>>>> On Dec 20, 2025, at 4:11 AM, David von Oheimb <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>> 
>>>> Hi Madison et al.,
>>>> thank you for your updates.
>>>> 
>>>> Nice that you were able to avoid breaking up the line containing 
>>>> "EXTENSION.&ExtnType({ExtensionSet}{@extnID})) OPTIONAL".
>>>> 
>>>> Well, regarding the recent below extension of the intro paragraph of 
>>>> Appendix A, 
>>>> having a close look again also at related parts of the document, 
>>>> I found that the term "Extension Request Template" newly used in the 
>>>> paragraph has been copied from section 7, 
>>>> while this term has not really been explicitly introduced (in section 3.4) 
>>>> and its OID uses the abbreviated name "extensionReqTemplate".
>>>> As long as this is not considered somewhat confusing, I'd be fine with it 
>>>> as well.
>>>> 
>>>> Appendix A not only introduces the Certification Request Information 
>>>> Template attribute 
>>>> and its Extension Request Template / extensionReqTemplate sub-attribute,
>>>> but also other sub-structures of the Certification Request Information 
>>>> Template.
>>>> 
>>>> If you are still open for a document adaptation, the paragraph may be 
>>>> improved to, e.g.,
>>>> 
>>>> This appendix provides an ASN.1 module \[X.680\] for the Certification
>>>> Request Information Template attribute and its sub-template structures.
>>>> It follows the conventions established in \[RFC5911\],
>>>> \[RFC5912\], and \[RFC6268\].
>>>> 
>>>> Regardless of this minor editorial point, since it only pertains to the 
>>>> informal intro of Appendix A,
>>>> I am also fine with the document, so you can note my approval as well.
>>>> 
>>>> David
>>>> 
>>>> 

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