On Sat, 2010-10-16 at 17:43 +0000, Nicole Cairns wrote: > > I uploaded Chapter 5 Managing Objects to the feedback folder. This was my > first review in the project, so if you have any feedback for me as an > reviewer, please let me know!
Nicole, Very good job. You spotted a lot of things Michele and I had missed, as well as some places where a minor reorganisation improved usability. I rejected a few instances of rewording that I think changed the meaning, but usually that indicates the meaning wasn't as clear as it should have been. Sometimes we get a bit too cryptic when summarising something. If you'd like to tackle Chapter 6 next...? We'd appreciate it, and if it means delaying book publication for a few days, that's okay. You found enough serious errors in Ch5 to make waiting worthwhile. Anyone else want to tackle an Impress Guide chapter? Preferable 7, 8, 9 or 10, which haven't had as much attention lately. (Everyone tends to start at Ch1 and never gets to the later chapters.) --Jean --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: [email protected] For additional commands, e-mail: [email protected]
