Thank you! I did start Chapter 6 and so far nothing major (I'm on page 7). I 
plan to finish tomorrow at some point. I'll keep you posted. 

Nicole 
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-----Original Message-----
From: Jean Hollis Weber <[email protected]>
Date: Sun, 17 Oct 2010 09:51:05 
To: <[email protected]>
Reply-To: [email protected]
Subject: Re: [authors] Feedback posted

On Sat, 2010-10-16 at 17:43 +0000, Nicole Cairns wrote:
> 
> I uploaded Chapter 5 Managing Objects to the feedback folder. This was my 
> first review in the project, so if you have any feedback for me as an 
> reviewer, please let me know!

Nicole,
Very good job. You spotted a lot of things Michele and I had missed, as
well as some places where a minor reorganisation improved usability. I
rejected a few instances of rewording that I think changed the meaning,
but usually that indicates the meaning wasn't as clear as it should have
been. Sometimes we get a bit too cryptic when summarising something.

If you'd like to tackle Chapter 6 next...? We'd appreciate it, and if it
means delaying book publication for a few days, that's okay. You found
enough serious errors in Ch5 to make waiting worthwhile.

Anyone else want to tackle an Impress Guide chapter? Preferable 7, 8, 9
or 10, which haven't had as much attention lately. (Everyone tends to
start at Ch1 and never gets to the later chapters.)

--Jean


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