Hello Hazel I agree with you totally. I am currently looking at the content of the chapter for consistency with 3.3 and also just for its logic. The latter looks ok so far, but there are many places which beg for a rewrite. This would significantly enhance the readibility.
Martin On Tue, 28 Dec 2010 18:33:02 +0000 Hazel Russman <[email protected]> wrote: > This chapter has now been updated. > > I am not very happy with the PDF for this chapter. I have found a lot of > errors (listed below) and, in addition, the whole thing does not read > idiomatically. > > I suppose nothing can be done about this now (apart from correcting the > actual errors) but it might be an idea to check the corresponding > chapter for Calc 3.3 for style before it gets published. > > Errors > ------ > p.27. "can contains": > p.31. "in one of these area". Also "drop down list". > p.43. "the option Automatic" should be "the Automatic option" > p.46. "data basis" should be "database" > p.47. "You have to always update". Better "You always have to update" > p.48 "A change of the existing...". Better "Changing the existing..." > "to the that" > p.54 "The target field to specify" should be "The target field specifies" > "to always use". Better "always to use" > ---- > Hazel Russman <[email protected]> > > --------------------------------------------------------------------- > To unsubscribe, e-mail: [email protected] > For additional commands, e-mail: > [email protected] > -- Martin J Fox 马丁·福克斯 [email protected] [email protected] _______________________________________ VK7MM/HB9TQX Registered as #324626 with the Linux counter, www.counter.li.org QQ 775937674 / MSN [email protected] Henny Youngman: "I told the doctor I broke my leg in two places. He told me to quit going to those places." --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: [email protected] For additional commands, e-mail: [email protected]
