Martin, Any estimate of when you might be able to finish a draft of your revision of this chapter?
--Jean On Tue, 2010-12-28 at 22:30 +0100, Martin Fox wrote: > Hello Hazel > I agree with you totally. I am currently looking at the content of the > chapter for consistency with 3.3 and also just for its logic. The latter > looks ok so far, but there are many places which beg for a rewrite. This > would significantly enhance the readibility. > > Martin > > > On Tue, 28 Dec 2010 18:33:02 +0000 > Hazel Russman <[email protected]> wrote: > > > This chapter has now been updated. > > > > I am not very happy with the PDF for this chapter. I have found a lot of > > errors (listed below) and, in addition, the whole thing does not read > > idiomatically. > > > > I suppose nothing can be done about this now (apart from correcting the > > actual errors) but it might be an idea to check the corresponding > > chapter for Calc 3.3 for style before it gets published. > > > > Errors > > ------ > > p.27. "can contains": > > p.31. "in one of these area". Also "drop down list". > > p.43. "the option Automatic" should be "the Automatic option" > > p.46. "data basis" should be "database" > > p.47. "You have to always update". Better "You always have to update" > > p.48 "A change of the existing...". Better "Changing the existing..." > > "to the that" > > p.54 "The target field to specify" should be "The target field specifies" > > "to always use". Better "always to use" > > ---- > > Hazel Russman <[email protected]> > > --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: [email protected] For additional commands, e-mail: [email protected]
