Adam Roach has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-bess-nsh-bgp-control-plane-13: No Objection
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bess-nsh-bgp-control-plane/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Thanks for the work on this document. I have only two comments, both minor and editorial. --------------------------------------------------------------------------- Please expand the following acronyms upon first use, in the abstract, and in the title; see https://www.rfc-editor.org/materials/abbrev.expansion.txt for guidance. - NSH - SFC - AFI - SAFI - AF - NLRI - L3VPN - EVPN --------------------------------------------------------------------------- §8, §8.1, §8.2, §8.3, §8.4, §8.5, §8.6, §8.7, §8.7, §8.9.1, §8.9.2, §8.9.3, §8.9.4, §8.9.1, §8.9.2: All of the examples in these sections use IPv4 addresses exclusively. Please update them to use IPv6 exclusively, or to use a mix of IPv4 and IPv6. See https://www.iab.org/2016/11/07/iab-statement-on-ipv6/ for further details. _______________________________________________ BESS mailing list BESS@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/bess
