Looks good, Clay. Two suggestions: > 39 You may need to set the paths for your build tools > 40 (the ONBLD_TOOLS variable) and the path for your compilers > 41 (the SPRO_ROOT variable). > I think it's worthwhile to indicate the defaults.
> 77 7. Finally, to build, run: ./nightly developer.sh > 78 Which builds the source from the downloaded repository. > The wording still seems slightly off here. May I suggest Build the source by running: ./nightly developer.sh This will pull the source from the downloaded repository. - Keith Clay Baenziger wrote: > Hello, I'm looking for someone to review my English in the changes > made to our gate's README. I've tried answering bug 9165 and making > other good hygiene clean-ups. > > Webrev: > http://cr.opensolaris.org/~clayb/9165/ > Bug: > http://defect.opensolaris.org/bz/show_bug.cgi?id=9165 > Thank you, > Clay > _______________________________________________ > caiman-discuss mailing list > caiman-discuss at opensolaris.org > http://mail.opensolaris.org/mailman/listinfo/caiman-discuss
