Clay Baenziger wrote: > Hello, I'm looking for someone to review my English in the changes made > to our gate's README. I've tried answering bug 9165 and making other > good hygiene clean-ups. > > Webrev: > http://cr.opensolaris.org/~clayb/9165/ > Bug: > http://defect.opensolaris.org/bz/show_bug.cgi?id=9165 > Thank you, > Clay > _______________________________________________ > caiman-discuss mailing list > caiman-discuss at opensolaris.org > http://mail.opensolaris.org/mailman/listinfo/caiman-discuss
Hi Clay, Looks good for the most part. 38 It isn't clear how one knows whether they need to set these variables. 78 Maybe reword slightly: Finally, to build, run: ./nightly developer.sh Which builds the source from the downloaded repository. If you do not wish to do a Mercurial pull as part of the nightly run, use the -n option. ./nightly -n developer.sh -> Finally, to build the source from a downloaded repository, run: ./nightly developer.sh If you do not wish to do a Mercurial pull as part of the nightly run, use the -n option: ./nightly -n developer.sh Thanks, Sue
