On Thu, 30 Apr 2009, Ethan Quach wrote:

>
>
> Susan Sohn wrote:
>> Hi Ethan,
>> 
>> It looks ok, but I'd suggest the following wording change:
>> 
>> Due to dependency issues, SUNWcsd and SUNWcs
>> must be listed first in the package list,
>> after entire, and SUNWcsd must precede SUNWcs
>> 
>> ->
>> 
>> Due to dependency issues, entire must be listed first
>> in the package list, followed by SUNWcsd, and then SUNWcs.
>
> Sounds fine to me.  I'll accept.
> In addition, I'll add a follow on line to clarify:
>
>     Due to dependency issues, entire must be listed first in
>     the package list, followed by SUNWcsd, and then SUNWcs.
>     Any additional packages must be listed after SUNWcs.
>
>
> (Alok, does that sound okay to you?)

That works for me.

Alok

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