Your rewrite is much more clear. It also clarifies what name parameter's 
purpose is.
One minor nit:
You might want to say the following, if I'm understanding what you're 
intent is:

to provide in error output


instead of

to provide in errors


No need for another review.

ginnie


On 12/11/08 12:49, Clay Baenziger wrote:
> Hi Ginnie,
>
> Yes verifyXML.py just got that tabbing fix.
>
> The reason for calling out the StringIO bits is due how it's different
> than a generic file object. StringIO emulates a file but using a string as
> the backing store. In particular, with how errors are currently handled,
> this means an error message may not be able to have a reasonable user
> meaningful reference to a file, if the error happens in an XML "file"
> backed by a StringIO object.
>
> The XML Tree object is from the LXML package. To clarify that I changed
> the wording to LXML XML Tree object.
>
> I also standardized the two comments, as I had two different structures
> which was a mess.
>
> Please let me know what you think, the new webrev is at
> http://cr.opensolaris.org/~clayb/bug4606/webrev1
>
>                                                       Thank you,
>                                                       Clay
>
> On Wed, 10 Dec 2008, Virginia Wray wrote:
>
>   
>> Hi Clay -
>>
>> verifyXML.py - looks ok. It doesn't look like you made any changes other
>> than to correct the tabbing/spacing?
>>
>> publish-manifest.py -
>> lines 744 - 746:
>> I'm not sure I understand the significance of calling out the StringIO
>> in the comment, but maybe this is partially because I'm not that
>> familiar with python. Couldn't you just say that the input is a file
>> path? And then say the output is is XML Tree Object on success or raises
>> SystemExit on error and prints the name of the file (if available?).
>>
>> I'm curious - what is the XML Tree object being returned?
>>
>> The rest looks ok.
>>
>> thx,
>> ginnie
>>
>>
>>
>> On 12/08/08 15:46, Clay Baenziger wrote:
>>     
>>> Haha, thank you Tim. No it was just to see if my mind was being read. Now
>>> that I know my mind is leaky but only running into the storm drain, here's
>>> the URL:
>>> http://cr.opensolaris.org/~clayb/bug4606/webrev/
>>>                                                             Thank you,
>>>                                                             Clay
>>>
>>> On Mon, 8 Dec 2008, Tim Knitter wrote:
>>>
>>>
>>>       
>>>> Clay,
>>>>
>>>> Does this come with separate URL gift in another thread? ;-)
>>>>
>>>> Thanks
>>>> Tim
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>         
>>>>> Hello,
>>>>>   This is a pretty straight forward bug fix for the number of
>>>>> parameters to verifySCmanifest() passed on line 624, and to correctly use
>>>>> a name value passed to verifySCmanifest(). Similarly, I've fixed a
>>>>> formatting/style error on line 40 of verifyXML.py and added more to the
>>>>> comments of verifySCmanifest() and verifyAImanifest().
>>>>>                                                   Thank you,
>>>>>                                                   Clay
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