Geoffrey and Barbara,

Does the online help text also need to change?

For example, for the text installer, the help screen says under SIZE:
   The recommended size and minimum size for the Oracle Solaris OS
   installation are displayed.
Seems like maybe that would need to change slightly.

Sue

On 06/14/12 10:53 AM, Barbara Lundquist wrote:
Geoffrey,
I understand the change is only from "recommend disk space" to "recommended
minimum disk space".
I am OK with that change and can followup with getting that change made in the
Install Guide and in the Release Notes.
Barbara



Geoffrey Hart wrote:
Barbara:

This is the change I discussed in email with you in email a couple of weeks
ago. If you are still ok with this change, please confirm on this thread.

Thanks,
Geoffrey


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Geoffrey:

Your fix also had documentation impact since we document the disk size
recommendation in the release notes. Since the wording change, we need to
update the release note wording as well.

I had included Barbara Lundquist and I believe a doc impact bug should be filed

The link to the S11 FCS is here:

http://docs.oracle.com/cd/E23824_01/html/E23811/glmru.html#glmuu



On 06/13/12 03:58 PM, Geoffrey Hart wrote:
Thank you Takeshi for helping me get this right for internationalization.

Below is an updated webrev for review.

BUG: 7097153 Advice seems oddly small for solaris partition

CODE REVIEW:
https://cr.opensolaris.org/action/browse/caiman/ghart/UpdateDiskSizeText2/

DESCRIPTION: Wording improvement for the recommended disk size. Before it
listed the "minimum" and "recommended" size. The new wording makes it clear
that what we are showing is the "minimum" and "recommended minimum" size.

TESTING:
- Confirmed that new test appears in the text and gui installer.
- Verified that the install still succeeds and the OS boots correctly after
install.

Thanks,
Geoffrey

On 06/12/12 19:45, Takeshi Asano wrote:
Hi Ginnie,

Regarding current case, the spaces look for indentation and not
padding (for alignment between labels) so problem could be less
than in the padding case. But it's still better to move
the spaces outside of _() so how about to do like this:

+ REC_SIZE_TEXT = _("Recommended minimum: ")
+ self._size_line = DiskScreen.MIN_SIZE_TEXT + min_size_str + \
+ " " + DiskScreen.REC_SIZE_TEXT + rec_size_str

There are two typical types of use of spaces in string literal:

(1) padding for alignment between labels
(2) indentation

As Jack said, key (more problematic) is (1) for localizable strings.
It's often not clear the spaces are for padding for alignment, which
string to align with, and also the other string's length can be changed
when localized.

Spaces for (2) is usually no need to adjust number of spaces so less
problematic than in (1), but it's better to exclude the spaces from
localizable string (move it out from _()).

Thanks,
Takeshi

On 2012年06月13日 02:19, Jack Schwartz wrote:
Hi Geoffrey.

Regarding Ginnie's comment: Takeshi-san told me the same thing about
padding. The issue is that while the padding may be good for the C locale,
it will won't accommodate words of different lengths from other languages.
The key is to do dynamic padding, and adjust the offset of the right-side
words based on the length of the largest left-side word. For an example,
please highlighted lines from 463-497 of support.py see my latest code review:

https://cr.opensolaris.org/action/browse/caiman/schwartz/7162609_2/webrev.2a/

Thanks,
Jack

On 06/12/12 09:36, Virginia Wray wrote:
Hi Geoffrey --

Just one comment on the disk_selection.py file.

Mary did a bug fix not too long ago. It was 7170341.
There was a discussion regarding padded spaces in
the static string, such as what is at line 76.

Takashi said that it would be more appropriate for
internationalization to eliminate padding spaces from
the static string and doing dynamic padding.

I think Mary was going to follow up on this. Can check
and see if that would apply in this case as well?

Other than that, your changes look fine.

thanks,
ginnie


On 06/11/12 03:28 PM, Geoffrey Hart wrote:
Afternoon all!

Could I please have a code review for:

BUG: 7097153 Advice seems oddly small for solaris partition

CODE REVIEW:
https://cr.opensolaris.org/action/browse/caiman/ghart/UpdateDiskSizeText/

DESCRIPTION: Wording improvement for the recommended disk size. Before it
listed the "minimum" and "recommended" size. The new wording makes it
clear that what we are showing is the "minimum" and "recommended minimum"
size.

TESTING:
- Confirmed that new test appears in the text and gui installer.
- Verified that the install still succeeds and the OS boots correctly
after install.

Thanks,
Geoffrey
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