On Thu, 22 Feb 2024 23:14:37 GMT, Brent Christian <bchri...@openjdk.org> wrote:

>> I note that the adjective(s) (un)successful and the adverb(s) 
>> (un)successfully are used at several places in these comments, it might 
>> makes sense to use those terms here as well such that the documentation in 
>> internally consistent in its use of success or failure of actions. In 
>> particular, if this terminology is consistent with precedent in the official 
>> JLS spec.
>> 
>> However, I note that there are places where these terms are italicized and 
>> places where they aren't. I am not sure I follow the convention for 
>> italicization. In general, the first use (i.e. introduction) of a term that 
>> the reader might want to pay attention to calls for italicization when 
>> documents are read sequentially, such as in research papers. These javadoc 
>> specs will usually not be read in sequentially. But considering that someone 
>> does read them in order, I'd suggest italicizing only the first use of the 
>> term or, if not, then perhaps none. Alternatively, you might want to 
>> italicize all uses (but why?).
>
> Thanks for finding my misspelling, djelinski. 👍

The use of "(un)successful(ly)" in relation to `Reference.enqueue()` is quite 
deliberate (and builds on the previous wording, "successful").

The intention was to use it consistently (is that not the case somewhere?). For 
example, it's also used in the new **Memory Consistency Properties** section of 
the `java.lang.ref` package docs ("The enqueueing of a reference...by a 
successful call to `Reference.enqueue()`...").

A "successful call to `enqueue()`" is meant to be shorthand for:
"the reference has been enqueued, and the enqueuing was performed by the 
`enqueue()` method (rather than by the garbage collector). Therefore there is a 
_happens-before_ edge between the `enqueue()` method call and the dequeuing of 
the Reference (whereas there would not be this _happens-before_ if the GC had 
already enqueued the Reference at the time of the `enqueue()` call)."

The text emphasis with italics is to indicate this added significance of the 
result of the `enqueue()` call -- ala `happens-before`.

I'm not aware of a similar scenario covered in the JLS, so AFAIK there is not 
precedent to be consistent with in that regard.

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PR Review Comment: https://git.openjdk.org/jdk/pull/16644#discussion_r1500073141

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