Hello. Make my day - please correct my english essay. I've just started in 'high school' (or its european equivalent, I don't know what it is called - we're aged 15-17) and this is my first english essay. I wan't to impress my teacher.
Anyhow - please correct my english essay. It's 545 words long and consists a summary of a short story and a 'comment-part'. I wan't you to correct my linguistic errors and spelling problems, and please feel free to correct my language, if it sounds wrong and out of context. Perhaps I'm just being paranoid, but I don't like to publish it. I'll send you a mail with the essay, if you don't mind. I'm looking forward to hear from you. PTL,
