well,.ur articel makes sense in a very particular way,.. anyways,..u do know that it's an essay not a mathematical equation right,..so maybe 'time multiply money' is a bit stiff,..maybe use 'time Vs money',..and work ur way around it!..
'you spend ur time, u'll save ur money',...??...u mean no time no gain?? and dude,..u dont use 'example:'..but u can use 'for instance'..like the bus-taxi instance! the last paragraph is a bit weird,.though I do understand them,.maybe don't use so much reverse repetition,..,. - it's better to find the best way to spend both of your time and money wisely......(maybe start off the sentence like this,.and try to draw your conclusion with it!) cheers! --~--~---------~--~----~------------~-------~--~----~ You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "Correct my English" group. To post to this group, send email to [email protected] To unsubscribe from this group, send email to [EMAIL PROTECTED] For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/correct-my-english -~----------~----~----~----~------~----~------~--~---
