My correction of your essay grammar-wise; ---------if it 'have' must be 'has' Time 'multiplied' by money equals ----------------- It 'means' Use contraction for 'will' as 'you'll'
ou can go to school by taxi or by bus (don't repeat 'can' ) 'multiplying them' On 1/20/08, mehdi <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > > Hello > please , read this essay and if it have mistak, send me a mail > thanks > > Time and Money > > Time multiply by money squals "done work" or "constant value" > It`s mean, if you spend your money, you will save your time, and if > you spend your time, you will save your money > > Example: you can go to school by taxi or you can go by bus > If you go by taxi, you will arrive earlier, but you have to pay more > money. > If you go by bus you will arrive later, but your money is saved. > > It`s better we find optimum point between our monet and our time. > If my time is not very important it will be better that we don`t spend > our money, but if my time is important, and we have to arrive on time > it will be better we spend our money. > So, time is more important then money. > But multiply of them is constant. > What do you think? > > > > > --~--~---------~--~----~------------~-------~--~----~ You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "Correct my English" group. To post to this group, send email to [email protected] To unsubscribe from this group, send email to [EMAIL PROTECTED] For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/correct-my-english -~----------~----~----~----~------~----~------~--~---
