On Fri 01 Dec 2006, Helge Kreutzmann wrote: > > I provide the improvements as pseudo diff against the pot file:
(a little more context would have been useful...) > -"modifications (or miss out on the new changes). Now you can adjust the file > " > +"modifications each time (or miss out on the new changes). Now you can > adjust the file " OK > -"For this to work, however, you must install the new /etc/cron.daily/" > -"tmpreaper file this time." > +"For this to work, however, you have to install the new /etc/cron.daily/" > +"tmpreaper now." I don't agree right away that this makes much difference. > Maybe you can find a native English speaker to proof read the file > also. I went to Engish speaking schools until I was 18 :-) I have an English O-level grade B which is higher than many Brits have, in my experience :) > "Before, you could set the maximum age for files before they were removed in > /" > "Previously, you could set the maximum age for files before they were removed > in /" OK > I don't understand the following string: > "You apparently have changed the default value in /etc/tmpreaper.conf; you " > "may want to check /etc/default/rcS to see if the value there is acceptable, " > "if you the upgrade procedure to replace your /etc/tmpreaper.conf with the " > "new version." I think a word dropped out during editing... It should probably be "if you want the upgrade procedure ..." or perhaps s/want/tell/, you decide what's clearer :) > -"doc/tmpreaper/README.security.gz e.g. with zless. Therein is contained a " > +"doc/tmpreaper/README.security.gz, e.g. with zless. Therein is contained a " Hmm, again, I don't really see that this makes much difference. That said, if I'm going to change it anyway, I might as well make this change; I'm not bothered either way but it'll make you happy :) thanks, Paul -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to [EMAIL PROTECTED] with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact [EMAIL PROTECTED]
