Hi Helge Sorry for the delay in answering. Thanks a lot for the suggestions. I will look into this.
I have also seen a suggestion for German translation. Thanks a lot for that one as well. However I have a question there. Is that one based on this patch, or is it based on the system before your suggested changes? The reason I'm asking is whether I need to update your German patch if I do these changes. Best regards, // Ola On Sat, Sep 03, 2011 at 04:33:11PM +0200, Helge Kreutzmann wrote: > Package: debarchiver > Version: 0.9.6 > Severity: minor > Tags: patch > > While working on the German translation of the man page several > phrases were detected, which could deserver a language improvement: > > -"administrators that needs special packages, or tweaked versions to ease " > +"administrators that need special packages, or tweaked versions to ease " > > -"The criteria for which binary packages that should be installed even if it " > -"does not have a .changes file, default $distinputcriteria.\n" > +"The criteria for binary packages that should be installed even if they " > +"do not have a .changes file, default $distinputcriteria.\n" > > -"This is the directory where the all packages and corresponding *.changes " > +"This is the directory for all packages and corresponding *.changes " > > -"Define which format has to be used to send emails with the user command\n" > -"specify by --mailfrom. Only sendmail and mail formats are supported. By\n" > -"default, if this option is not given, debarchiver assumes the sendmail\n" > -"format. The argument can be one of the followings:\n" > +"Define which format have to be used to send emails with the user command\n" > +"specified by --mailfrom. Only sendmail and the mail format are supported. > By\n" > +"default, if this option is not given, debarchiver assumes the sendmail\n" > +"format. The argument can be one of the followings:\n" > > -"Scan using apt-ftparchive or dpkg-scan* depending on what is installed on " > +"Scan using apt-ftparchive or dpkg-scan depending on what is installed on " > > -"Force install of changes files even if some files already exists with wrong > " > -"size or md5 hash." > +"Force install of .changes files even if some files already exist with wrong > " > +"sizes or md5 hashes." > > -"The criteria for which packages that should be installed even if it does > not " > +"The criteria for packages that should be installed even if they do not " > > -"Force install of changes files even if some files already exists with wrong > " > -"size or md5 hash. Default to 0." > +"Force install of .changes files even if some files already exist with wrong > " > +"sizes or md5 hashes. Default to 0." > > -" * If a file that is about to be installed, already exist in the archive > and " > +" * If a file that is about to be installed already exist in the archive and > " > > -" * Changes file is incomplete and has been there for $incompletetime > time.\n" > -" * A file that is part of the Changes file is not yet big enough and the " > -"changes file has been there for $incompletetime time.\n" > -" * A file that is part of the Changes file is bigger than specified.\n" > -" * If verify signatures is enabled and signature do not match.\n" > +" * If a .changes file is incomplete and has been there for $incompletetime > time.\n" > +" * If a file that is part of the .changes file is not yet big enough and > the " > +".changes file has been there for $incompletetime time.\n" > +" * If a file that is part of the .changes file is bigger than specified.\n" > +" * If verify signatures is enabled and signatures do not match.\n" > > Please note that I'm not a native speaker, you might want to consult > one (e.g. debian-l10n-english) for further improvements. > > Please unfuzzy all translations after fixing: > http://www.debian.org/doc/developers-reference/best-pkging-practices.html#s6.5.2.3 > > > -- > Dr. Helge Kreutzmann deb...@helgefjell.de > Dipl.-Phys. http://www.helgefjell.de/debian.php > 64bit GNU powered gpg signed mail preferred > Help keep free software "libre": http://www.ffii.de/ -- --------------------- Ola Lundqvist --------------------------- / o...@debian.org Annebergsslingan 37 \ | o...@inguza.com 654 65 KARLSTAD | | http://inguza.com/ +46 (0)70-332 1551 | \ gpg/f.p.: 7090 A92B 18FE 7994 0C36 4FE4 18A1 B1CF 0FE5 3DD9 / --------------------------------------------------------------- -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to debian-bugs-dist-requ...@lists.debian.org with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact listmas...@lists.debian.org
