[ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1972?page=comments#action_12455401 ] Laura Stewart commented on DERBY-1972: --------------------------------------
Hi Kim - Here are my comments: PDF copyright (page 4) appears run together. I would ask about this on derby-dev and perhaps someone like Andrew can fix it. he copyright info on page 5 is just fine. Introduction and prerequisites = twwdIntro.dita The shortdesc seems really long. How about this: > Working With Derby needs some formatting fixes and other minor cleanup > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > Key: DERBY-1972 > URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1972 > Project: Derby > Issue Type: Bug > Components: Documentation > Affects Versions: 10.2.1.6 > Reporter: Kim Haase > Assigned To: Kim Haase > Priority: Minor > Attachments: DERBY-1747.diff, DERBY-1972-2-dita.zip, > DERBY-1972-2.diff, DERBY-1972-2.zip, DERBY-1972.zip, DERBY_1972.diff > > > The Working With Derby book uses DITA tags in ways that are not always > consistent with the usage in other books and that lead to some problems in > the processed output. Some examples are the use of the <varname> tag in > inappropriate places and the use of formatting tags within <codeblock> tags. > There are also a few minor punctuation and syntax issues worth fixing. -- This message is automatically generated by JIRA. - If you think it was sent incorrectly contact one of the administrators: http://issues.apache.org/jira/secure/Administrators.jspa - For more information on JIRA, see: http://www.atlassian.com/software/jira
