On Mar 1, 2017 12:02, "Máirín Duffy" <du...@fedoraproject.org> wrote:

> Hi Jonathan,
>
> On 03/01/2017 12:01 PM, Jonathan Petruska wrote:
>
>> Any feedback on my design.  It isn't very minimalist, but it did match
>> the theme.  I think it looks more like what would be used as a supplemental
>> though
>>
>
> Ah I thought you were still working on another version so was waiting for
> you to send a link to that. The version I saw is here:
> https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/design-team@li
> sts.fedoraproject.org/message/TRIZJSMNPX7VFTYWE5RPETRQ3CWFJ254/
>
> I like the color palette; I really love the sci-fi style of the trees.
> Definitely goes with the technology theme. I'm not sure the white waveform
> running in front of the trees works - it seems kind of noisy and hard to
> parse - but where it's just on top of the water and horizon it gives a kind
> of neat glow effect, and I wonder if that might look neat behind the trees
> instead.
>
> I think the trees are probably a bit too regular and you're going to want
> a bit more diversity between them so they don't look like clones.
>
> I think the scene is maybe a bit bare and might do with some more elements
> to the texture of the sky and water. The clouds in the inspiration photo
> are an example of an environmental element that might work.
>
> Hope this helps! Thanks for the mockup, it's neat!
>
> ~m
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