On Mar 1, 2017 12:02, "Máirín Duffy" <du...@fedoraproject.org> wrote:
> Hi Jonathan, > > On 03/01/2017 12:01 PM, Jonathan Petruska wrote: > >> Any feedback on my design. It isn't very minimalist, but it did match >> the theme. I think it looks more like what would be used as a supplemental >> though >> > > Ah I thought you were still working on another version so was waiting for > you to send a link to that. The version I saw is here: > https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/design-team@li > sts.fedoraproject.org/message/TRIZJSMNPX7VFTYWE5RPETRQ3CWFJ254/ > > I like the color palette; I really love the sci-fi style of the trees. > Definitely goes with the technology theme. I'm not sure the white waveform > running in front of the trees works - it seems kind of noisy and hard to > parse - but where it's just on top of the water and horizon it gives a kind > of neat glow effect, and I wonder if that might look neat behind the trees > instead. > > I think the trees are probably a bit too regular and you're going to want > a bit more diversity between them so they don't look like clones. > > I think the scene is maybe a bit bare and might do with some more elements > to the texture of the sky and water. The clouds in the inspiration photo > are an example of an environmental element that might work. > > Hope this helps! Thanks for the mockup, it's neat! > > ~m > _______________________________________________ > design-team mailing list -- design-team@lists.fedoraproject.org > To unsubscribe send an email to design-team-le...@lists.fedoraproject.org >
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