Also, I really want to ripple the bottom.  To me, it looks like it is
reflecting on ice, not water.  I will edit the colours of the trees to add
variance.

On Wed, Mar 1, 2017 at 1:08 PM, Jonathan Petruska <bubbly...@gmail.com>
wrote:

> This is a potential version I worked on.  The bg may be too busy, and or
> white in the center. http://imgur.com/a/8TSkn.  I will work on it when I
> get back to my dorm.  The fog is separate from the spectrum, and can be
> adjusted independently.  I feel that the original colours to the BG were
> better, but "blend mode -> color (or 'hue')" is a raster layer setting.
> I'm assuming keeping it in inkscape for scale-ability is a must.
>
> On Wed, Mar 1, 2017 at 1:03 PM, Jonathan Petruska <bubbly...@gmail.com>
> wrote:
>
>>
>> On Mar 1, 2017 12:02, "Máirín Duffy" <du...@fedoraproject.org> wrote:
>>
>>> Hi Jonathan,
>>>
>>> On 03/01/2017 12:01 PM, Jonathan Petruska wrote:
>>>
>>>> Any feedback on my design.  It isn't very minimalist, but it did match
>>>> the theme.  I think it looks more like what would be used as a supplemental
>>>> though
>>>>
>>>
>>> Ah I thought you were still working on another version so was waiting
>>> for you to send a link to that. The version I saw is here:
>>> https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/design-team@li
>>> sts.fedoraproject.org/message/TRIZJSMNPX7VFTYWE5RPETRQ3CWFJ254/
>>>
>>> I like the color palette; I really love the sci-fi style of the trees.
>>> Definitely goes with the technology theme. I'm not sure the white waveform
>>> running in front of the trees works - it seems kind of noisy and hard to
>>> parse - but where it's just on top of the water and horizon it gives a kind
>>> of neat glow effect, and I wonder if that might look neat behind the trees
>>> instead.
>>>
>>> I think the trees are probably a bit too regular and you're going to
>>> want a bit more diversity between them so they don't look like clones.
>>>
>>> I think the scene is maybe a bit bare and might do with some more
>>> elements to the texture of the sky and water. The clouds in the inspiration
>>> photo are an example of an environmental element that might work.
>>>
>>> Hope this helps! Thanks for the mockup, it's neat!
>>>
>>> ~m
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