Don't know why I am receiving this. It has no bearing on me. --- On Fri, 8/20/10, Drew Jensen <drewjensen.in...@gmail.com> wrote:
From: Drew Jensen <drewjensen.in...@gmail.com> Subject: Re: [documentation-dev] Re: Feedback for Base Tutorial To: dev@documentation.openoffice.org Date: Friday, August 20, 2010, 9:14 AM Hi, Went over Section 1 this morning. One small typo - 1st paragraph on page 28 "spouses of a person, and unsigned byte ", the 'and' >> 'an'. The chapter on normalization is excellent. The chapter on data types I really want to go over again, I felt a bit uneasy with one of two items. Nit-picky stuff, rather the nature of the subject matter. Anyway, I may want to offer a replacement for one or two lines (that's all) - but want first to go check some facts. I can get to that this evening, but again, it's nit-picky so maybe not appropriate for the audience. Also, perhaps others may have a different take on it. Over all Section 1 is quite good IMO. Alright - I'll get to Section 2 tomorrow. Thanks Drew --------------------------------------------------------------------- To unsubscribe, e-mail: dev-unsubscr...@documentation.openoffice.org For additional commands, e-mail: dev-h...@documentation.openoffice.org