On Mon, 2017-12-04 at 21:13 +0000, Otto van der Schaaf wrote: > Hi all, > > I have a draft ready for the December podling report over at: > https://docs.google.com/document/d/10kz6tIvLoZiuD9SQtYKBVB3TaUawIXc2N6-fSX5Q9eY/edit?usp=sharing > > Any thoughts? Anything that should be added / changed? > Please let me know!
- Overall looks good, thanks. - Couple of places I'd add an explicit "No" or "N/A" where there's nothing to say under a template heading. - Possibly a bit much technical detail in the project progress section, most notably "Progress was made on [something you have to be pretty close to the project to understand]". And is Debian inclusion really an apache matter? I'm not saying you should change any of the technical detail, but perhaps think more "executive summary" in future? "Work continues on matters of protocol compliance". "We're talking with Debian about packaging pagespeed". Bear in mind the board has a lot of reports to read! Or maybe that's just me? -- Nick Kew
