Looks good. Thanks Praneesha! On Fri, Apr 18, 2014 at 8:48 AM, Praneesha Chandrasiri <[email protected]> wrote: > @Chris - > > Thanks for the comments. I have added them in the Introduction. > > @Udara - > > Thanks for pointing that out. > > I have corrected that as " ...it is fully tested on Amazon EC2 and Openstack > and is in the process of being tested on VMware vCloud". > > > On Fri, Apr 18, 2014 at 12:54 PM, Udara Liyanage <[email protected]> wrote: >> >> Hi Praneesha, >> >> "it is fully tested on Amazon EC2, Openstack and VMWare vCloud" . Is it >> fully tested on VMware cloud and openstack? >> >> >> On Fri, Apr 18, 2014 at 6:53 AM, chris snow <[email protected]> wrote: >>> >>> Hi Praneesha, >>> >>> I only have some minor observations: >>> >>> 1) Cartridges are presented as if the user is already aware of >>> cartridges: >>> >>> "The cartridge concept allows the users of Apache Stratos to develop >>> and run their own cartridges using any language or framework. " >>> >>> maybe something like this? >>> >>> "Stratos manages application using Cartridges. The cartridge >>> concept allows the users of Apache Stratos to develop and run their >>> own cartridges using any language or framework. " >>> >>> 2) It may be useful to give a simple definition of polyglot in terms >>> of what that means to Stratos. >>> >>> "Apache Stratos supports polyglot environments including PHP, MySQL, >>> and can be extended to support many more. " >>> >>> There is a definition of polyglot on wikipedia, but it doesn't >>> really make sense for Stratos and will just confuse readers: >>> >>> "In computing, a polyglot is a computer program or script written in >>> a valid form of multiple programming languages, which performs the >>> same operations or output independent of the programming language used >>> to compile or interpret it." - Wikipedia >>> >>> We should probably provide a footnote with something like this: >>> >>> "Polyglot: It’s an environment that uses multiple languages >>> simultaneously." - >>> >>> http://blog.smartbear.com/cloud-computing/polyglot-no-one-language-will-rule-the-cloud/ >>> >>> Many thanks, >>> >>> Chris >>> >>> On Fri, Apr 18, 2014 at 6:34 AM, Praneesha Chandrasiri >>> <[email protected]> wrote: >>> > Hi all, >>> > >>> > Appreciate your valuable input in $subject, which can be found in [1] >>> > please. >>> > >>> > [1] >>> > >>> > https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/STRATOS/4.0.0+Introducing+Apache+Stratos >>> > -- >>> > Thanks & Best Regards, >>> > Praneesha Chandrasiri >>> > Technical Writer >>> > WSO2 Inc. >>> > Mobile: +(94) 718156888 >>> > E-mail: [email protected] >>> > >>> >>> >>> >>> -- >>> Check out my professional profile and connect with me on LinkedIn. >>> http://lnkd.in/cw5k69 >> >> >> >> >> -- >> >> Udara Liyanage >> Software Engineer >> WSO2, Inc.: http://wso2.com >> lean. enterprise. middleware >> >> web: http://udaraliyanage.wordpress.com >> phone: +94 71 443 6897 > > > > > -- > Thanks & Best Regards, > Praneesha Chandrasiri > Technical Writer > WSO2 Inc. > Mobile: +(94) 718156888 > E-mail: [email protected] >
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