Thanks for all the valued inputs Chris!
On Fri, Apr 18, 2014 at 1:32 PM, chris snow <[email protected]> wrote: > Looks good. Thanks Praneesha! > > On Fri, Apr 18, 2014 at 8:48 AM, Praneesha Chandrasiri > <[email protected]> wrote: > > @Chris - > > > > Thanks for the comments. I have added them in the Introduction. > > > > @Udara - > > > > Thanks for pointing that out. > > > > I have corrected that as " ...it is fully tested on Amazon EC2 and > Openstack > > and is in the process of being tested on VMware vCloud". > > > > > > On Fri, Apr 18, 2014 at 12:54 PM, Udara Liyanage <[email protected]> wrote: > >> > >> Hi Praneesha, > >> > >> "it is fully tested on Amazon EC2, Openstack and VMWare vCloud" . Is it > >> fully tested on VMware cloud and openstack? > >> > >> > >> On Fri, Apr 18, 2014 at 6:53 AM, chris snow <[email protected]> > wrote: > >>> > >>> Hi Praneesha, > >>> > >>> I only have some minor observations: > >>> > >>> 1) Cartridges are presented as if the user is already aware of > >>> cartridges: > >>> > >>> "The cartridge concept allows the users of Apache Stratos to develop > >>> and run their own cartridges using any language or framework. " > >>> > >>> maybe something like this? > >>> > >>> "Stratos manages application using Cartridges. The cartridge > >>> concept allows the users of Apache Stratos to develop and run their > >>> own cartridges using any language or framework. " > >>> > >>> 2) It may be useful to give a simple definition of polyglot in terms > >>> of what that means to Stratos. > >>> > >>> "Apache Stratos supports polyglot environments including PHP, MySQL, > >>> and can be extended to support many more. " > >>> > >>> There is a definition of polyglot on wikipedia, but it doesn't > >>> really make sense for Stratos and will just confuse readers: > >>> > >>> "In computing, a polyglot is a computer program or script written in > >>> a valid form of multiple programming languages, which performs the > >>> same operations or output independent of the programming language used > >>> to compile or interpret it." - Wikipedia > >>> > >>> We should probably provide a footnote with something like this: > >>> > >>> "Polyglot: It’s an environment that uses multiple languages > >>> simultaneously." - > >>> > >>> > http://blog.smartbear.com/cloud-computing/polyglot-no-one-language-will-rule-the-cloud/ > >>> > >>> Many thanks, > >>> > >>> Chris > >>> > >>> On Fri, Apr 18, 2014 at 6:34 AM, Praneesha Chandrasiri > >>> <[email protected]> wrote: > >>> > Hi all, > >>> > > >>> > Appreciate your valuable input in $subject, which can be found in [1] > >>> > please. > >>> > > >>> > [1] > >>> > > >>> > > https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/STRATOS/4.0.0+Introducing+Apache+Stratos > >>> > -- > >>> > Thanks & Best Regards, > >>> > Praneesha Chandrasiri > >>> > Technical Writer > >>> > WSO2 Inc. > >>> > Mobile: +(94) 718156888 > >>> > E-mail: [email protected] > >>> > > >>> > >>> > >>> > >>> -- > >>> Check out my professional profile and connect with me on LinkedIn. > >>> http://lnkd.in/cw5k69 > >> > >> > >> > >> > >> -- > >> > >> Udara Liyanage > >> Software Engineer > >> WSO2, Inc.: http://wso2.com > >> lean. enterprise. middleware > >> > >> web: http://udaraliyanage.wordpress.com > >> phone: +94 71 443 6897 > > > > > > > > > > -- > > Thanks & Best Regards, > > Praneesha Chandrasiri > > Technical Writer > > WSO2 Inc. > > Mobile: +(94) 718156888 > > E-mail: [email protected] > > > > > > -- > Check out my professional profile and connect with me on LinkedIn. > http://lnkd.in/cw5k69 > -- Thanks & Best Regards, *Praneesha Chandrasiri* *Technical Writer* *WSO2 Inc. * *Mobile: +(94) 718156888* *E-mail: [email protected] <[email protected]>*
