On Tue, Jun 12, 2018 at 12:03:51PM -0700, Adam Williamson wrote: > On Tue, 2018-06-12 at 20:55 +0200, Miro Hrončok wrote: > > On 12.6.2018 20:35, Adam Williamson wrote: > > > "The installed system must be able to install, remove, and install > > > > Install, remove and update? > > That would be simpler but unfortunately loses the "appropriate" > wording, which is important. We could make it "appropriately update" > but that reads kinda weird to me.
Miro has a point, this sentence doesn't make sense as is. In "The installed system must be able to install, remove, and install appropriate updates for software ..." the subject is "updates", so both "install" and "remove" apply to it. Another noun must be inserted. Something like "The installed system must be able to install and remove <packages>, and install appropriate updates for software ...", except that <packages> (as you wrote) is not generic enough. So maybe something like "The installed system must be able to install, remove, and update the software with the default console tool for the relevant software type (e.g. default console package manager). The downloading of any packages/software must work and the appropriate updates must be used." Zbyszek _______________________________________________ devel mailing list -- devel@lists.fedoraproject.org To unsubscribe send an email to devel-le...@lists.fedoraproject.org Fedora Code of Conduct: https://getfedora.org/code-of-conduct.html List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines List Archives: https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/devel@lists.fedoraproject.org/message/3WHV6LSPJZMPR5KM47RIDXNNQZQGQNNA/
