On Tue, 2018-06-12 at 22:02 +0000, Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek wrote: > On Tue, Jun 12, 2018 at 12:03:51PM -0700, Adam Williamson wrote: > > On Tue, 2018-06-12 at 20:55 +0200, Miro Hrončok wrote: > > > On 12.6.2018 20:35, Adam Williamson wrote: > > > > "The installed system must be able to install, remove, and install > > > > > > Install, remove and update? > > > > That would be simpler but unfortunately loses the "appropriate" > > wording, which is important. We could make it "appropriately update" > > but that reads kinda weird to me. > > Miro has a point, this sentence doesn't make sense as is. > > In "The installed system must be able to install, remove, and install > appropriate updates for software ..." the subject is "updates", so > both "install" and "remove" apply to it. Another noun must be inserted.
No, it isn't. The sense is: "The installed system must be able to: 1) install 2) remove 3) install appropriate updates for software..." If that isn't sufficiently clear, though, I'll try to reword it. -- Adam Williamson Fedora QA Community Monkey IRC: adamw | Twitter: AdamW_Fedora | XMPP: adamw AT happyassassin . net http://www.happyassassin.net _______________________________________________ devel mailing list -- devel@lists.fedoraproject.org To unsubscribe send an email to devel-le...@lists.fedoraproject.org Fedora Code of Conduct: https://getfedora.org/code-of-conduct.html List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines List Archives: https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/devel@lists.fedoraproject.org/message/7R7CFQ7HV6YJTKR3QVD2R72OP4YSNU7E/
