On 6/22/22 15:05, Vipul Siddharth wrote:
== Benefit to Fedora ==
This proposal ensures than no new packages in Fedora will rely on the
deprecated OpenSSL version that will cause an overall increase of
security/stability, and will reduce the amount of old packages relying
on OpenSSL 1.1 series.

This sentence is too long, and as a result I don't think readers will understand it the way it was intended. I suggest simplifying to:

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This proposal ensures that no new packages in Fedora will rely on the deprecated OpenSSL version.  That  change will cause an overall increase in security/stability, and will reduce the amount of old packages relying on OpenSSL 1.1 series.

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In addition to the wording changes, do you mean 'package-versions' here where you say 'packages'? Is a new version of OpenSSH, for example, considered a 'new package' for the purposes of this proposal?

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Kevin P. Fleming
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Principal Program Manager, RHEL
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