On 11/30/2010 01:30 PM, Jon Lebkowsky wrote:
I glanced at the article; the facts are there, the tone could be more
objective.
The tone gets less NPOV describing the more recent history and current
organization of chapters.
It might be worth deleting some of this and keeping the article tightly
focussed on the history of the organization. People can find out about
the structure on the website.
SCDC seems pretty clearly defined to me: Swarthmore Coalition for the
Digital Commons. Might be good to put SCDC in parens after that
reference, for better clarity.
I added a definition.
The wonder of Wikipedia is that even wikilawyering deletionist
speed-readers can be of use in improving articles. ;-)
- Rob.
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