On Dec 17, 2010, at 8:33 AM, Andres Blanc wrote: > On Viernes 17 Diciembre 2010 04:15:40 Jesse Charbneau escribió: >> Hello, >> I’ve been working off list with Gustavo, and we’d like to get some >> feedback on the design thats been worked out. >> >> http://e-www.thecharbneaus.com/p.php?p=about&l=en > > I like it. It might have too much text for my personal taste, but that's > subjective. Regardless, here is some text I wrote for this when I was > actively > involved with the website that could be useful: > > PNG (for easier reading): http://i.imgur.com/Bbfvy.png > HTML: http://pastebin.com/6X0eM9N7 >
Ok, I will review. Most of the text changes I made were minor. They mainly had to do with the flow of the sentence or similar. I can make changes as needed, so let me know if there is something specific you’d like worked on. > Notice the additional links to pages that actually mention the EFL in > relation > to the products being pimped, I think that's important. Also, replacing the > references to Yellow Dog Linux and Openmoko and with newer and more popular > examples (like the ubuntu thingy) would be a good idea. > Ubuntu thingy? Not sure what you’re referring too. The only thing I can think of would be that little menu thing they whipped up (didn’t work so hot on my Q1B device, so dumped it pretty quickly). If someone can provide “News headings” that should be there, I can change it pretty easily. > In an unrelated note: Is there a little love of the history of the project? A > sub-page or something somewhere would make me a very happy panda. > > PNG: http://i.imgur.com/gV5Dw.png > HTML: http://pastebin.com/JsLkKzQN > > Everything I wrote, in both cases, might need a review since it was written a > long time ago. We can add that page. The sub system generating the pages seems pretty flexible, so just let me know where and what the pages should be, and any content that should be there and I can take care of those requests. > >> http://e-www.thecharbneaus.com/p.php?p=download&l=en >> http://e-www.thecharbneaus.com/p.php?p=support&l=en > > The content itself looks good, short and to the point but both of these > layouts > look awkward to me (specially download). I don't know if its a browser bug. > Here are some screenshots: > > http://i.imgur.com/SJ8qF.png > http://i.imgur.com/WyNbl.png Yes, the alignment seemed odd to me as well, but Marina and Gustavo believe it will help distinguish sections of the page, as in a brochure. Sounded logical to me (I have zero knowledge of print media, or pretty much any media outside of computer related which != art media ;-) > > If you plan to keep the current header let me know and I will clean up the > CSS > for you since it was automatically generated using Sass[1]. It also contains > various fixes to the main website and I never got around cleaning up or > commenting either. > I can keep the current header if the community wants it, or we can change it. I can clean up the css if needed. I”ve made a few classes of my own, etc and will need to integrate that more as we move forward (some things I’ve still got defined in style tags - so those need to be pulled in too). > [1] http://sass-lang.com/ > > Thanks for your work and keep fighting the good fight. > No worries. Glad I can be of use. Maybe one day I’ll be able contribute something else (thinking booze here, but maybe code too ;-). Jess > > > > > > > > ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ > Lotusphere 2011 > Register now for Lotusphere 2011 and learn how > to connect the dots, take your collaborative environment > to the next level, and enter the era of Social Business. > http://p.sf.net/sfu/lotusphere-d2d > _______________________________________________ > enlightenment-devel mailing list > enlightenment-devel@lists.sourceforge.net > https://lists.sourceforge.net/lists/listinfo/enlightenment-devel ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Lotusphere 2011 Register now for Lotusphere 2011 and learn how to connect the dots, take your collaborative environment to the next level, and enter the era of Social Business. http://p.sf.net/sfu/lotusphere-d2d _______________________________________________ enlightenment-devel mailing list enlightenment-devel@lists.sourceforge.net https://lists.sourceforge.net/lists/listinfo/enlightenment-devel
