And I'll also add being "really new to interface design" as you claim,
you're off to a very good start.

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>>-----Original Message-----
>>From: [EMAIL PROTECTED] 
>>[mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] On Behalf 
>>Of Glen Pike
>>Sent: Thursday, May 15, 2008 7:31 PM
>>To: Flash Coders List
>>Subject: Re: [Flashcoders] Bag Builder Feedback Please
>>
>>Hi,
>>
>>    It looks pretty good - your layout is nice and clean and 
>>you have the grid thing going on too.
>>
>>    I agree with the comments on the rollover - they are 
>>quite small / fiddly.  If you are on a 1280 sized layout, 
>>then don't be afraid to use the height - you may be able to 
>>use the extra space to make your colour buttons easier to hit.
>>
>>    If you want some examples of tricks to make your selected 
>>colour more apparent then look at:
>>   
>>    O'neill's wetsuit custom build -
>>http://www.oneill.com/mens-surf-wetsuit-builder.php - a bit 
>>tricky on 1280 screen to read the text, but once you get to 
>>choosing the colours, you will see what I mean.
>>
>>    Timberland's custom boot builder leads you step by step.  
>>This has the advantage of leading the visitor and also 
>>sharing the interface space so you can have bigger controls...
>>
>>    
>>http://www.timberland.com/product/index.jsp?showConfigurator=t
>>rue&productId=2052969
>><http://www.timberland.com/product/index.jsp?showConfigurator=
>>true&productId=2052969>
>>
>>    Puma's Mongolian Shoe BBQ has 2 ways - a creative, but 
>>frustrating interface, or the simpler "Take Out" version 
>>again, it's okay from a creative perspective, but fiddly to 
>>use - not good.
>>
>>    https://www.puma.com/secure/mbbq/pindex.jsp?ip=GB it does 
>>become annoying when it ties up your browser though...
>>
>>    There's loads out there, but the benefit of your's is 
>>that it is simple and straightforward - capitalise on that 
>>and take some of Jason's comments into account, but it's 
>>looking good so far, although you may need to work on the 
>>kevlar image - it looks a bit out of scale when applied :)
>>
>>    HTH
>>
>>    Glen
>>
>>   
>>
>>TS wrote:
>>> Thanks for the input. I'm really stumped on the design part.
>>>
>>> -----Original Message-----
>>> From: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
>>> [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] On Behalf Of 
>>> Merrill, Jason
>>> Sent: Thursday, May 15, 2008 2:47 PM
>>> To: Flash Coders List
>>> Subject: RE: [Flashcoders] Bag Builder Feedback Please
>>>
>>> Looks good, I like the interactivity.  From a usability 
>>perspective, 
>>> there is an issue you will definitely want to fix.  I would make 
>>> clicking on a color "stick" better than you currently do so 
>>that a new 
>>> color does not get changed on the bag when you roll out of the area.
>>> Otherwise, to change a color and make it stick, you have to 
>>carefully 
>>> roll your cursor straight up or down to get out of the 
>>color selection
>>> area.   instead, make rolling over change colors inside a smaller
>>> version of the bag, and when you click a color, make it 
>>stick on the 
>>> "final" larger view of the bag, or something like that.  Or do away 
>>> with the rollovers alltogether and only make the colors 
>>change on the 
>>> bag when you click on a color, then it would stick and you wouldn't 
>>> have the rollover change conflicts.  I know you have some kind of 
>>> "click to make it stick" functionality already, but it's getting 
>>> erased by the rollovers. I tried making a bag all red or all yellow 
>>> and found it difficult becauase the colors kept changing 
>>due to the rollovers.
>>>
>>> Also, the black font's face and weight are a little bland, 
>>especially 
>>> against the grey.  Grey is good, but overall it's a little 
>>blah.  Not 
>>> too bad though.  I would also dump the standard "add to cart" Flash 
>>> button in favor of a nicer looking custom one with an icon.
>>>
>>> Jason Merrill
>>> Bank of America
>>> Global Technology & Operations L&LD
>>> eTools & Multimedia
>>>
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>>>
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>>>  
>>>
>>>   
>>>>> -----Original Message-----
>>>>> From: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
>>>>> [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] On Behalf Of TS
>>>>> Sent: Thursday, May 15, 2008 4:27 PM
>>>>> To: 'Flash Coders List'
>>>>> Subject: [Flashcoders] Bag Builder Feedback Please
>>>>>
>>>>> I'm really new to interface design and was wondering if I could 
>>>>> please get some feedback on this and how I can make it 
>>better? ANY 
>>>>> advice would be appreciated and/or if you like it.
>>>>>
>>>>> http://labs.worthwhileindustries.com/as2/bagBuilder/
>>>>>
>>>>> Much Appreciation, T
>>>>>
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