YOSHIMATSU Toshihide wrote:
> > I've spent an hour or so making the key assignments accurate and improving 
> > the 
> > mouse mode description. An updated version is available here:
> > 
> > http://www.nanjika.co.uk/flightgear/FGShortRef.pdf
> > 
> > Comments are very welcome as always. 
> 
> Stuart, here I describe some comments and minor corrections.

Thank-you very much for taking the time to proof-read this. It's very
much appreciated.

I've uploaded an updated version to 

http://www.nanjika.co.uk/flightgear/FGShortRef.pdf

> > Program Start: Linux/UNIX via the fgfs under /FlightGear,
> > Windows via the FlightGear wizard fgrun.exe under
> > /FlightGear/bin/Win32/
> 
> These path names seem as if "/FlightGear" is a root directory.
> I think it might be better to write "FlightGear" and
> "FlightGear\bin\Win32", respectively.

I've changed this to:

"Linux/UNIX via the fgfs under FlightGear/,
Mac OS X via FlightGear.app under /Applications/,
Windows via the FlightGear wizard fgrun.exe under \Program 
Files\FlightGear\bin\Win32\"


> > Tab. 5: Special action of keys, if autopilot is enabled. [U.S.
> > keyboard uses "." instead of ","]
> (snip...)
> > 0 / , Heading adjust
> 
> According to $FG_ROOT/keyboard.xml, AP heading adjustment keys are not
> "0 / ," but "4 / 6".
> Thus, the description for Tab. 5. can be simplified as "Tab. 5:
> Special action of keys, if autopilot is enabled."

Good spot. Corrected.

> > N/n Decrease/Increase selected propellor RPM
> 
> Minor typo.
> "propellor" --> "propeller" or "propellers".

Done.

> Mouse controlled functions:
> 
> > 1. In normal mode (pointer cursor), the panel and cockpit controls
> > can be operated using the mouse. To change a control,click with the
> > left/middle mouse button on the corresponding knob/lever. Generally,
> > the left side of the control decreases the setting, while the right
> > side increases the setting. The left mouse button makes small
> > changes while the right button makes larger ones.
> 
> I think "left side" and "right side" might be better to write "left
> button" and "middle button", respectively.

"left side" and "right side" refer to the control on the panel rather than the
mouse, so this is accurate.

> Meanwhile, to my knowledge of 1.9.1, left button and middle buttons
> act as fine and coarse tuning, respectively.

Another good spot (I'd said that the right button made a coarse change).

> Which knob/lever which can be increased/decreased using left/middle
> mouse buttons?

None. I think this arises from confusion over "left side" vs. "right side".

> > 2. In control mode (cross hair cursor), the mouse is used to
> > directly contol the aircraft in the absence of a joystick.
> 
> Minor typo.
> "contol" --> "control"

Done.

> > Holding the mouse button down while moving the mouse controls the
> > throttle (forwards/backwards) and rudder (left/right). 
> 
> My suggestion.
> "the mouse button down" --> "the left mouse button down"

I've clarified this further, as 

"Holding the left mouse button down allows control of the rudder (left/right), 
while holding the middle mouse button controls throttle (forwards/backwards)."

> > Short Reference by M. Basler, S. Buchanan for FlightGear version
> > 1.9.2.
> 
> FG Short Reference uses 1.9.2, but the Manual uses 2.0.0.
> Which is correct as version number of the next release?

I've now changed this to read 2.0.0.



      

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