I agree that these changes are all minor enough that any one of these could be handled by an RFC editor's note. The issue that I have is that there are a lot of them, and this document hasn't gone in front of the IESG yet. Thus there are very likely to be additional updates needed to deal with in order to resolve IESG comments. It gets quite confusing to keep a long RFC editor's note up to date while making additional changes to the document.
Thus I think that it would be less confusing to update the document with these changes, and then I can put the document on the IESG agenda soon after the IETF meeting. Thanks, Ross -----Original Message----- From: Danny McPherson [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] Sent: 11 November 2008 00:32 To: Brian E Carpenter; Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) Cc: General Area Review Team; Ross Callon; [EMAIL PROTECTED]; [EMAIL PROTECTED] Subject: Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-isis-wg-extlsp-03.txt OK, a summary of discussion takeaways is below. Unless there are objections, I believe all of these can be resolved by the RFC Editor actions and would prefer that over issuing an -04 revision. Anyone have issues with this? If I missed (or mis-captured) any comments please let me know as well. Brian and Gen-ART team, thanks much for your diligence and usual careful review! -danny --- Request that this document obsoletes RFC 3786. - Expand "Virtual IS" in S4.2.2 to Virtual System with "(Virtual IS)" following in parentheses. - Replace "IS-Alias" in S4.4 text with "IS Alias ID" - s/[ISO 10589]/[IS-IS] - s/[IS- IS]/[IS-IS]/ - s/[RFC 2119]/[BCP14]/ - S 4.4: s/RFC 3784/[RFC 5305]/ S 4.5: s/RFC 3784/[RFC 5305]/ - S 4.5: s/RFC 4205/[RFC 5307]/ - Remove reference [BCP9] Remove reference [BCP26] Remove reference [BCP79] - Update reference with: [M-IS-IS] Pryzgienda, T., Shen, N., and Sheth, N., "Multi Topology (MT) Routing in IS-IS", RC 5120, February 2008. - Replace: [RFC 3784] Smit, H. and T. Li, "Intermediate System to Intermediate System (IS-IS) Extensions for Traffic Engineering (TE)", RFC 3784, June 2004. With: [RFC 5305] Smit, H. and T. Li, "IS-IS Extensions for Traffic Engineering", RFC 5305, October 2008. - Replace: [RFC 4205] Kompella, K. and Rehkter, Y., "Intermediate System to Intermediate System (IS-IS) Extensions in Support of Generalized Multi-Protocol Label Switching (GMPLS)", RFC 4205, October 2005. With: [RFC 5307] Kompella, K. and Rehkter, Y., "IS-IS Extensions in Support of Generalized Multi-Protocol Label Switching (GMPLS)", RFC 5307, October 2008. - Move from Normative to Informative Reference: [RFC 3786] Hermelin, A., Previdi, S. and Shand, M., "Extending the Number of Intermediate to Intermediate (IS-IS) Link State PDU (LSP) Fragments Beyond the 256 Limit," RFC 3786, May 2004. _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
