I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-dnssd-requirements-04 Reviewer: Ben Campbell Review Date: 2014-12-22 IETF LC End Date: 2015-01-07 IESG Telechat date: (if known) Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as an informational RFC. Its well written and easy to understand. Major issues: None Minor issues: The acronym is a bit unfortunate. I suspect that much of the target audience already knows SSD as "solid-state drive" Of course, I don't really expect you to change it at this point in the process. :-) Nits/editorial comments: -- IDNits reports a couple of out-of-date references. -- REQ2: Am I correct in assuming that this would not apply to case C when used in zero configuration mode? _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
