Big thanks for your review, Ben. Jari
On 23 Dec 2014, at 01:40, Ben Campbell <[email protected]> wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments > you may receive. > > Document: draft-ietf-dnssd-requirements-04 > Reviewer: Ben Campbell > Review Date: 2014-12-22 > IETF LC End Date: 2015-01-07 > IESG Telechat date: (if known) > > Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as an informational > RFC. Its well written and easy to understand. > > Major issues: > > None > > Minor issues: > > The acronym is a bit unfortunate. I suspect that much of the target audience > already knows SSD as "solid-state drive" Of course, I don't really expect you > to change it at this point in the process. :-) > > Nits/editorial comments: > > -- IDNits reports a couple of out-of-date references. > > -- REQ2: > > Am I correct in assuming that this would not apply to case C when used in > zero configuration mode? > > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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