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Document: draft-ietf-precis-framework-22
Reviewer: Tom Taylor
Review Date: 2015-02-14
IETF LC End Date: 2015-02-19
IESG Telechat date: 2015-02-19
Summary: Ready to go with one nit. Noted that idNits is not happy with
the reference to RFC 20 because of the latter's unknown state.
Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
Section 1, bullet a: s/included protocol/included in a protocol/
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