Hi Tom, thanks for the review.
On 2/14/15 6:57 PM, Tom Taylor wrote:
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-precis-framework-22
Reviewer: Tom Taylor
Review Date: 2015-02-14
IETF LC End Date: 2015-02-19
IESG Telechat date: 2015-02-19
Summary: Ready to go with one nit. Noted that idNits is not happy with
the reference to RFC 20 because of the latter's unknown state.
Actually, RFC 20 is now Internet Standard (only 46 years in the making!):
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ietf-announce/rlIsY8yvvKhbkbkuk2mcQ-ylSNw
But perhaps the IDnits database doesn't know that yet.
Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
Section 1, bullet a: s/included protocol/included in a protocol/
Noted, thanks!
Peter
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