>>>>> On Tue, 05 Oct 2021, Sam James wrote:
 
> +Notes element
> +~~~~~~~~~~~~~
> +
> +The ``<notes/>`` element describes important information on how to maintain
> +a package.
> +
> +The ``<notes/>`` element has an obligatory ``type=""`` attribute whose value 
> is
> +can be either ``text`` or ``url``. If its value is ``text``, then the

Too many verbs ("is can be") in this sentence.

> +``<notes/>`` value is formed of multi-line text. If its value is ``url``, the
> +``<notes/>`` value should be a link to a page containing information on how
> +to correct maintain the package.

Since this is plain text, it presumably should have an optional "lang"
attribute for consistency with other elements.

Ulrich

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