On Mon, 2009-02-23 at 13:52 +0100, Wouter Bolsterlee wrote: > 2009-02-23 klockan 10:43 skrev Christian Rose: > > On 2/23/09, Alexander Larsson <al...@redhat.com> wrote: > > > On Fri, 2009-02-20 at 15:24 +0000, Karl Lattimer wrote: > > > > > Untrusted application launcher > > > > > The file %s is an application launcher, but it is not marked > > > trusted. > > > > > If you recieved this file from an unknown source or did not expect > > > it > > > > > to be an application launcher it may be unsafe to launch. > > > > > > > > > > [_Launch anyway] [Mark as _Trusted] [[Cancel]] > > > > > > > > > > I don't feel this is a great wording, but I don't have any better > > > ideas. > > > > > Maybe some native english speaker could help out? > > > > > > > > The application launcher %s is not marked as trusted. If this > > > > application launchers source is unknown to you then it may be unsafe to > > > > launch. > > > > > > > > [_Launch anyway] [Mark as _Trusted] [[Cancel]] > > > > > > > > Sound better? > > > > > > Yeah, this looks better to me. > > > > The possessive looks a bit weird, and the second sentence seems a bit > > long. I'd like to add a modified proposal: > > > > The application launcher %s is not marked as trusted. If the source > > of this application launcher is unknown to you, then it may be > > unsafe to launch. > > > > This clearly seems important, so string freeze approval from me. > > 1. Why use the passive voice in the first sentence ("... is unknown to > you")? Directly addressing the user seems more logical in this case. > 2. Why "is marked as trusted"? I think "has been marked trusted" makes more > sense? > 3. Reordering the words so that it ends with the word "unsafe" likely gets > more attention from the user. > 4. File names should be enclosed in double quotes. > > So, my suggestion: > > The application launcher "%s" has not been marked as trusted. If you do > not know this application launcher's source, launching it may be unsafe.
This looks good to me, can i have another string freeze approval please? _______________________________________________ gnome-i18n mailing list gnome-i18n@gnome.org http://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo/gnome-i18n